This Arrival
A Valentine Note to valuable friendships17 total reviews
Comment from Hitcher
WOW! You definitely know how to brighten one's day Jimi, I'm sure Aussie would have been floating on cloud nine after reading your heartfelt offering, you have such a way with words friend...Beautiful!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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WOW! You definitely know how to brighten one's day Jimi, I'm sure Aussie would have been floating on cloud nine after reading your heartfelt offering, you have such a way with words friend...Beautiful!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Hitcher, you are such a sweetheart. thank you my wonderful friend..jimi
Comment from Dave M
Jimi,
This is an excellent poem about friendship. I'm not familiar with Aussie, but I'm pleased you have such a friend. I enjoyed this post and found nothing to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Jimi,
This is an excellent poem about friendship. I'm not familiar with Aussie, but I'm pleased you have such a friend. I enjoyed this post and found nothing to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Dave, once again thank you ever ever so much. I appreciate you.. jimi
Comment from Eleanor Buron
Wow! I like Aussie, too, and think this tribute to her is both fitting and beautiful! She is one of a kind, rare and as you say "irreplaceable"
Stanza 2, Line 5 "rests" I think you mean "rest"
I'm so happy to have read this lovely poetic tribute!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Wow! I like Aussie, too, and think this tribute to her is both fitting and beautiful! She is one of a kind, rare and as you say "irreplaceable"
Stanza 2, Line 5 "rests" I think you mean "rest"
I'm so happy to have read this lovely poetic tribute!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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again Elly, thank you ever so much. I cannot find the words to express my gratitude.. Yes, Aussie is a wonderful inspiration and friend.. jimi
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All I can do is smile. You put so much enthusiasm in everything you write - even replies! ;)
Comment from Poetic Friend
Jimi, this brought tears to my eyes for it's enriched in beauty and eloquence. I am sure Aussie appreciate every word written in her honor. You are such an amazing freind and poet. It's always a pleasure reading your work.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Jimi, this brought tears to my eyes for it's enriched in beauty and eloquence. I am sure Aussie appreciate every word written in her honor. You are such an amazing freind and poet. It's always a pleasure reading your work.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Poetic Friend. where are you? You are always in my corner and so encouraging. I cannot find the words to express my immense gratitude. thank you thank you.. yes Aussie is very special, as are you!!! please post again, please... jimi
Comment from Newsome
A beautiful tribute to your friend. You have such a way with words. Your heart is filled with kindness and your soul is every bit as beautiful as the roses from Cleo's artwork, even more so...
Newsome
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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A beautiful tribute to your friend. You have such a way with words. Your heart is filled with kindness and your soul is every bit as beautiful as the roses from Cleo's artwork, even more so...
Newsome
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Newsome, hello. and thank you ever ever so much once again friend.. jimi
Comment from Daizie
What a wonderful, heartwarming tribute to your friend. Yes, sometimes we have the honor of meeting a really exceptional person who bestows upon our lives much happiness. I am so glad you found such a friend. It sounds like Aussie is indeed a rare gem and you have done a beautiful job of expressing your appreciation for her. Your poem flowed very nicely, and I love the pictures of such delicate pink roses-it suits your poem well.
Warm regards,
Daizie
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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What a wonderful, heartwarming tribute to your friend. Yes, sometimes we have the honor of meeting a really exceptional person who bestows upon our lives much happiness. I am so glad you found such a friend. It sounds like Aussie is indeed a rare gem and you have done a beautiful job of expressing your appreciation for her. Your poem flowed very nicely, and I love the pictures of such delicate pink roses-it suits your poem well.
Warm regards,
Daizie
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Daizie, once again, thank you ever ever so much. jlsavell
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You are ever so welcome, my dear :-)
Comment from RADIO
Your beautiful thoughts from
a grateful heart speaks to me
of some people recently coming
into my life. I have found more
honest care and compassion from them
than from those closest to me.
Perhaps they are angels? I'm out of 6's
P.S. I've been looking into that G-biology.
Radio
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Your beautiful thoughts from
a grateful heart speaks to me
of some people recently coming
into my life. I have found more
honest care and compassion from them
than from those closest to me.
Perhaps they are angels? I'm out of 6's
P.S. I've been looking into that G-biology.
Radio
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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RADIO, It is so good to hear from you.. I am thrilled you are looking into it. If you get would like, I could send a list of Docotrs who are experts in this field, you can google and see what they have to say. They are on the speaking circuit.. again thank you.. yuor friend .jimi
Comment from adewpearl
Kay told me you wrote this for her - she is SO pleased, as she ought to be :-)
She indeed does have a heart as warm as God's sun :-)
Lovely use of imagery
Love the consonance of soft S sounds in incandescent spirit/spills
and of F sounds in forever transformed
This is so very thoughtful as well as being beautifully composed :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Kay told me you wrote this for her - she is SO pleased, as she ought to be :-)
She indeed does have a heart as warm as God's sun :-)
Lovely use of imagery
Love the consonance of soft S sounds in incandescent spirit/spills
and of F sounds in forever transformed
This is so very thoughtful as well as being beautifully composed :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Brooke, once again thank you ever so much. Aussie is a dear and a dear friend to many here on Fanstory, you included... jimi
Comment from Minglement
This is an awesome tribute and a glowing portrait of true friendship. Gorgeous artwork to delicately accompany your well written piece. Lucky you and lucky Aussie to be so treasured. Thanks for sharing. Marcia
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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This is an awesome tribute and a glowing portrait of true friendship. Gorgeous artwork to delicately accompany your well written piece. Lucky you and lucky Aussie to be so treasured. Thanks for sharing. Marcia
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Minglement, what a pleasent surprise!! Thank you ever so much.. jlsavell
Comment from Aussie
Glorious painting, pink for love. You made me cry inside - I thank you for this honor for our friendship across the miles is but a moment. My grandmother related her words when I was a child "true friends are like diamonds, precious and rare, false ones like autumn leaves found everywhere. Bless you my dear friend in green check shorts...I see you in Texas! LOL.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Glorious painting, pink for love. You made me cry inside - I thank you for this honor for our friendship across the miles is but a moment. My grandmother related her words when I was a child "true friends are like diamonds, precious and rare, false ones like autumn leaves found everywhere. Bless you my dear friend in green check shorts...I see you in Texas! LOL.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Aussie, I am so glad you like my poem for you. You are very special/ Love you girl.. jimi
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My humble thanks for your thoughtfulness dear lady. You never know I might write a poem about my Tex-ass friend...?