Mister President, sleep well
Songlyric of protest against war42 total reviews
Comment from JaphetMphande
From the start, this poem gives me the interest to get into the minds of Mr President who seems not to have a good night for all the deaths that can be put in his hands and all the securities he needs.
Dream well Mr President. Nice poem throughout. Souls are perishing, governments are being looted by allies of Mr President because he can dream that he has thieves around him, the poor continue to be poor etc.
I liked your poem very much, thank you.
Because it speaks not only for an individual but for many on behalf of the world, you deserve more from my ratings, how about 6.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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From the start, this poem gives me the interest to get into the minds of Mr President who seems not to have a good night for all the deaths that can be put in his hands and all the securities he needs.
Dream well Mr President. Nice poem throughout. Souls are perishing, governments are being looted by allies of Mr President because he can dream that he has thieves around him, the poor continue to be poor etc.
I liked your poem very much, thank you.
Because it speaks not only for an individual but for many on behalf of the world, you deserve more from my ratings, how about 6.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Glad you liked it so much. And it still applies and to us all. Thanks so much for the beautiful six.
Comment from peggles
This was so sad and deep
My heart was crying as Iread your
Expressive words
Those in power can have
No thoughts of those who give their all
In their name
I thought this was anexcelent piece
Well done
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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This was so sad and deep
My heart was crying as Iread your
Expressive words
Those in power can have
No thoughts of those who give their all
In their name
I thought this was anexcelent piece
Well done
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Pleased you liked it so much. It is still applicable now. Thanks for the lovely six.
