Wife
A Clarity Pyramid15 total reviews
Comment from Bayberry
What a beautiful entry in the Clarity Pyramid contest. You've done an excellent and creative job expressing your theme. How in the world are you able to include the graphic in the Author Notes? What an eye-catching posting!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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What a beautiful entry in the Clarity Pyramid contest. You've done an excellent and creative job expressing your theme. How in the world are you able to include the graphic in the Author Notes? What an eye-catching posting!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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Hello and how sweet you are. The contest is over so I can say I appreciate your support and your review. xoxo Kiwi
Comment from Ankh
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Lol This is a true and insightful piece Debs. You have the knack of straight talk :-0~
Seth x
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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W ashing
I roning
F ***ing
E xcetera
Lol This is a true and insightful piece Debs. You have the knack of straight talk :-0~
Seth x
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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uhhhh wait a minute have you been messing around in my profile again...this is a blind contest ... I appreciate the review. thank you so much laughing as well ... at your response oh my !
Comment from Jean Lutz
Your are blessed as you made clear in your Clarity Pyramid. The woman in the picture is very attractive and her strength revealed. Best to you with the entry.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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Your are blessed as you made clear in your Clarity Pyramid. The woman in the picture is very attractive and her strength revealed. Best to you with the entry.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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Thank you Jean. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my work. This was the first clarity I have ever done. xoxo Kiwi
Comment from WilliamDeen
Yes that is what we wives do! We try to make life good for our husbands, kids and ourselves. We are part of our husband, he wouldn't be the same without us!
Nice poem, good form and cadence
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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Yes that is what we wives do! We try to make life good for our husbands, kids and ourselves. We are part of our husband, he wouldn't be the same without us!
Nice poem, good form and cadence
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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that and more hey? thanks for the solid support in this one. you rock! xoxo Kiwi
Comment from gazzagodbod
what a wonderful little poem so much from so few wonderful words i loved it thanks so much and good luck in the contest gazzagodbod
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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what a wonderful little poem so much from so few wonderful words i loved it thanks so much and good luck in the contest gazzagodbod
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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thanks I appreciate you stopping by and lending support on this one gazza. what a sweetheart you are. xoxo Kiwi
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in good syllable count and structure for the Clarity Pyramid
You explain well how this wife was a good life-partner - good luck in the contest. Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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Your poem is in good syllable count and structure for the Clarity Pyramid
You explain well how this wife was a good life-partner - good luck in the contest. Brooke :-)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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thank you for your vote of confidence Brooke...it was my first clarity format and I kinda liked it. xoxo Kiwi
Comment from Piggies Grandma
I enjoyed reading your poem very much. It is very clear that you think an awful lot of your wife. There are always some difficulties, but then you get to make up. Your poem is cleverly written and well thought out. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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I enjoyed reading your poem very much. It is very clear that you think an awful lot of your wife. There are always some difficulties, but then you get to make up. Your poem is cleverly written and well thought out. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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thank you Piggies for your sweet review and the support. It was the first one I've done and I like the format. You should try it. It's kinda cool. xoxo Kiwi
Comment from alexgardiner
difficulties perhaps some
"frank life-time collaborator"
Great poem Bonny Lass.
Very true to life.All the best in the contest Bonny Lass
the Auld yin
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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difficulties perhaps some
"frank life-time collaborator"
Great poem Bonny Lass.
Very true to life.All the best in the contest Bonny Lass
the Auld yin
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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thank you alex for stopping by and offering such great words of support.
Comment from MelissaBickel
The form is great and I love how you approached the topic of this one. It's a lovely way to say I love you to someone with a few lines of poetry. Nicely penned
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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The form is great and I love how you approached the topic of this one. It's a lovely way to say I love you to someone with a few lines of poetry. Nicely penned
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me.
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
your poem is beautifully written. The lady in your art work is very pretty. Your Clarity Pyramid is in excellent form with proper syllable count. You did a great job using alliteration with the W and C words. I enjoyed your lines: "worked hard always there you could count on her too difficulties perhaps some." The video you included is sweet. It's a shame Patrick passed away he had a lovely voice. Your poem is a real contender in the writing prompt. I wish you good luck in the contest. I'd recommend this poetic gem to others to review. Have a great day and keep on writing creatively.
Missy.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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Poet,
your poem is beautifully written. The lady in your art work is very pretty. Your Clarity Pyramid is in excellent form with proper syllable count. You did a great job using alliteration with the W and C words. I enjoyed your lines: "worked hard always there you could count on her too difficulties perhaps some." The video you included is sweet. It's a shame Patrick passed away he had a lovely voice. Your poem is a real contender in the writing prompt. I wish you good luck in the contest. I'd recommend this poetic gem to others to review. Have a great day and keep on writing creatively.
Missy.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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thank you for stopping by and sharing such a detailed review. So appreciate you taking the time and effort to do so.
