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Little Billy

Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "My faith in Jesus."
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Comment from Deorre Leonard
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My faith! Very well written. But I cant live without it so I muster up my courage, I pick it up like a shield and I go forward. Forever forward. well said... Deorre

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
    Thabnk you glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Jean Lutz
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We never know when it is our time -- faith should not be put off for the future. It should be practiced just like military training so that when it is needed we will be in shape.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
    sounds like a plan thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carrie Smith
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Hi there! What a well written expression of the need of faith-it is said that it can build mountains and that is so true. Liked the way you used fear as the counterpart of faith. Nice job...xoSusan

 Comment Written 23-May-2011


reply by the author on 26-May-2011
    thank you for the kind review.
reply by Carrie Smith on 26-May-2011
    You are very welcome, my friend! xoSusan
Comment from Bellringer
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K, your poem is an honest look at the struggle to maintain one's faith. I like the line "candle that burns,/Through the coldest night." Very good scriptural reference to the shield of faith. Blessings, Hector

 Comment Written 21-May-2011


reply by the author on 26-May-2011
    thanks hector
Comment from Cheryl1957
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A great poem that speaks about the importance of faith. I also like how you use fear as the opposite of faith. This is so true. Fear is such a hindrance in our lives and it is impossible to have faith and be fearful at the same time. You pointed it out in a unique way that really hit home with me. Great job!

 Comment Written 20-May-2011


reply by the author on 20-May-2011
    thank you.
Comment from Magics02
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Faith can build mountains and yours will too. I so love this what you did here and admire this poetic write one hundred percent. I felt as if I wrote it even so like minds think and feel alike. Blessings to you and a great job here

 Comment Written 20-May-2011


reply by the author on 20-May-2011
    thank you
reply by Magics02 on 22-May-2011
    You are so welcome and blessed