Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I have been praying for all who were effected by the outbreak of tornados. I hope you are doing well. I enjoyed reading your short story. I honestly believe some children have special gifts.

 Comment Written 08-May-2011

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reply by the author on 08-May-2011

Thank you so much for the concern and for the review and nice comments on the story. Those who were so badly affected by the storm or certainly in need of our prayers and help.
Beth

Comment from MS Writer

Excellent

What a wonderful story. If only this would be possible they would save many animals. Well written and a very enjoyable read. Very believable. I did see a few things you may want to revisit.

excepted from a
?escaped from a

I'll show show you.
?I'll show you.

 Comment Written 08-May-2011

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reply by the author on 08-May-2011

Thank you so much for the lovely review and for catching my spags. I've fixted them.
Beth

Comment from Robin Graves

Excellent

Typo? "Naysa was two and half when a bear excepted [escaped] from a traveling circus."
Fantastic piece and a seedling for a novel. You are my first five star rated author. Well done.

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 Comment Written 08-May-2011

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reply by the author on 08-May-2011

Thank ;you so much Robin, I appreciate you catching the typo and for the nice rating. I may consider continuing this story.
Beth