Comment from Piggies Grandma

Excellent

This poetry is well thought out and the rhyming is good all the way through. I liked reading your well written poem, I hope the right door is opened.

 Comment Written 06-May-2011

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reply by the author on 06-May-2011

thank you for your kind review

Comment from Regineld Shelton

Excellent

The antithesis of life is death. You have day and night, black and white rain or shine.
There are always opposites pulling at each other, and life takes place in between.
Good job at developing the theme.

 Comment Written 05-May-2011

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reply by the author on 05-May-2011

thank you for the kind review

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

You've managed to make these doors sound very ominous. Good luck in the contest.
I strain to see what god (God) has built.
Go threw (through) the door that is so near.

 Comment Written 05-May-2011

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reply by the author on 05-May-2011

thanks for the corrections
and the stars

Comment from quashdog

Excellent

Threw means to toss; I think you meant "through". Other than that the poem had good rythm and good rhyme and made a clear picture of what the doors represented.

 Comment Written 05-May-2011

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reply by the author on 05-May-2011

thanks yea i corrected that but I guess i didnt save it. thanks for the review and the stars.

Comment from The Stranger

Excellent

well I hope I do not have the choice to make because with my luck Id open the door and find the weirdo with the cloak and scythe waiting for me..lol!

 Comment Written 05-May-2011

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reply by the author on 05-May-2011

thank you for the kind review