Little Billy
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Silk Roses"memiors from my life experiences.
9 total reviews
Comment from quicksandyamurray
This is very well written and interesting. A glimpse into a male mind on the subject of women is always an interesting read. (and vice-versa). Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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This is very well written and interesting. A glimpse into a male mind on the subject of women is always an interesting read. (and vice-versa). Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Thank you for the six stars. this one is my favorite poem that I have written.
Comment from fluffnstuff
wow...that is a mouthful and a half...i like the describing, especially like silk flowers...that is really a great word picture. nice write
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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wow...that is a mouthful and a half...i like the describing, especially like silk flowers...that is really a great word picture. nice write
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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thanks fluff
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ur so welcome
Comment from Carrie Smith
We are exposed to a barge of 'how' we sre supposed to look, but we feel that only if we are play into it. Although a little imagination is not bad. Nice ways of pesenting your thoughts. I would never have come up with Vogue as your showcase! Enjoyed this! xxSusan
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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We are exposed to a barge of 'how' we sre supposed to look, but we feel that only if we are play into it. Although a little imagination is not bad. Nice ways of pesenting your thoughts. I would never have come up with Vogue as your showcase! Enjoyed this! xxSusan
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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thank you
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Welcome, my friend! xxx
Comment from Alisa_K
It is great! I really enjoyed it! Although I would correct the punctuation. That's the only thing that's a bit lame (but it's just my opinion). The poem is really good though! Thanks for sharing it!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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It is great! I really enjoyed it! Although I would correct the punctuation. That's the only thing that's a bit lame (but it's just my opinion). The poem is really good though! Thanks for sharing it!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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thank you
Comment from nancyjam
This is an interesting take on flipping
through the pages of Vogue. I like the
spacing of your lines, as though you
are turning a page with each one.
Nice word play and choice of language..
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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This is an interesting take on flipping
through the pages of Vogue. I like the
spacing of your lines, as though you
are turning a page with each one.
Nice word play and choice of language..
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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thank you the spacing was not intentional but rather the way i thought about it.
Comment from danpald
Well the poem does touch the theme
Love is all in the beholders mind
Many times the view of a woman's beauty
Becomes the dream that one unfolds
The unfolding often is far
From the reality that is to tell
For our dreams o0nly come to light
When love is less romance and more insight
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Well the poem does touch the theme
Love is all in the beholders mind
Many times the view of a woman's beauty
Becomes the dream that one unfolds
The unfolding often is far
From the reality that is to tell
For our dreams o0nly come to light
When love is less romance and more insight
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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yes you hit the nail on the head thank you.
Comment from DIS-illusioned
-- Completely devoid of punctuation. I take it this was intentional?
-- "is it a my mind that does think "
This reads awkward. Revise it.
-- Several question marks are needed. Re-read carefully and put them in.
-- "they must be me "
How are they you?
-- "is it real
or what I suppose is "
Reads awkward. Consider revising.
-- I think I know what you're getting at --unrealistic female images in magazines-- but you didn't express it well. It would have been better if you had used straight-forward language.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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-- Completely devoid of punctuation. I take it this was intentional?
-- "is it a my mind that does think "
This reads awkward. Revise it.
-- Several question marks are needed. Re-read carefully and put them in.
-- "they must be me "
How are they you?
-- "is it real
or what I suppose is "
Reads awkward. Consider revising.
-- I think I know what you're getting at --unrealistic female images in magazines-- but you didn't express it well. It would have been better if you had used straight-forward language.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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its not for every body
Comment from c_lucas
The male's mind can create images, or ideas. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Very good imagry.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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The male's mind can create images, or ideas. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Very good imagry.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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thanks again
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YOu're welcome.
Comment from The Stranger
Society determines the images that are then transposed ont the lkossy pages of top shelf intellectual material, well someone needs to take the credit!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Society determines the images that are then transposed ont the lkossy pages of top shelf intellectual material, well someone needs to take the credit!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Thanks for the kind review