Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "the twilight of history and age,"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'the twilight of history and age' is an extremely well- written and thought-provoking piece. Attempting to answer this talented poet's rhetorical questions is more than would dare to try. This was an intriguing work to both read and review.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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'the twilight of history and age' is an extremely well- written and thought-provoking piece. Attempting to answer this talented poet's rhetorical questions is more than would dare to try. This was an intriguing work to both read and review.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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thank you for the review
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You're welcome,
Kind wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hello deepwater,
This is a pleasantly put but searching bit of philosophy in which you expressed your point of view clearly.
It is a well written poem and an interesting read. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, W ^-^
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Hello deepwater,
This is a pleasantly put but searching bit of philosophy in which you expressed your point of view clearly.
It is a well written poem and an interesting read. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, W ^-^
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
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your welcome
Comment from Hurricane Dean
I think the last lines in this poem are really powerful:
"we each have our travels through the vistas of life, and, if our paths should perchance meet, well, perhaps we may travel together for a time..."
For me, these lines really pull the piece to together and makes this well worth a five star review. Good job. Dean
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I think the last lines in this poem are really powerful:
"we each have our travels through the vistas of life, and, if our paths should perchance meet, well, perhaps we may travel together for a time..."
For me, these lines really pull the piece to together and makes this well worth a five star review. Good job. Dean
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
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thank you
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
I like the sense of passing on the torch from age to youth in these lines: "This generation is yours, the past we endured to bring you up to this day." Best regards, Jeanie Mercer
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I like the sense of passing on the torch from age to youth in these lines: "This generation is yours, the past we endured to bring you up to this day." Best regards, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
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thanks for the review
Comment from Writeaway...
deepwater, a throughly enjoyable piece of creative writing, your writing is well written and flows well, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
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deepwater, a throughly enjoyable piece of creative writing, your writing is well written and flows well, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
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thank you
Comment from jdrhye
Interesting choice of analogies. The poem flows well and is relatable and easy to decipher meaning. It keeps the reader thinking after the poem has bee read and gives time to engage in own philosophies.
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Interesting choice of analogies. The poem flows well and is relatable and easy to decipher meaning. It keeps the reader thinking after the poem has bee read and gives time to engage in own philosophies.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
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thank you for the review
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Gary - I haven't come across a poem of
yours for some time
A most enjoyable read, my friend.
determined,we each - space after comma
Margaret
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Gary - I haven't come across a poem of
yours for some time
A most enjoyable read, my friend.
determined,we each - space after comma
Margaret
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
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Thank you Margaret, is nice to be back and writing again
Comment from Mª Luisa López Pisú
I love your poem full of reflection and written with great inspiration. Congratulations. The poem itself is written and full of very accomplished a great thought. Never make any changes. Greetings corina55
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I love your poem full of reflection and written with great inspiration. Congratulations. The poem itself is written and full of very accomplished a great thought. Never make any changes. Greetings corina55
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thank you
Comment from Magics02
What a great thought provoking write done so explicit of commentary and philosophy. I love your mindset in this one and agree wholeheartedly with the whole poem. Great job here deepwater. Made me to stop and pause in reflection here.
Blessings
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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What a great thought provoking write done so explicit of commentary and philosophy. I love your mindset in this one and agree wholeheartedly with the whole poem. Great job here deepwater. Made me to stop and pause in reflection here.
Blessings
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
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thank you
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You are so welcome
Comment from Amanda Dcosta
Inspiring...
This is like a reflection upon years spent and what you leave behind for the next. It is so beautifully written; the choice of words, the imagery and the theme.
Might I suggest you split the second last line? I feel when you break it up, it would be more emphatic. But then, thats just subjective and can be ignored too.
On the whole a really, really, lovely poem.
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Inspiring...
This is like a reflection upon years spent and what you leave behind for the next. It is so beautifully written; the choice of words, the imagery and the theme.
Might I suggest you split the second last line? I feel when you break it up, it would be more emphatic. But then, thats just subjective and can be ignored too.
On the whole a really, really, lovely poem.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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thank you for reading
