Comment from Carrie Smith

Excellent

Hi. A very lilting airy feeling to this poem. Nice imagery! I can just see that little boy, his head thrown back in glee. Great job. Best of luck in the contest. Susanxxx

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010

Thank you for the kind review.

reply by Carrie Smith on 07-Dec-2010

You are welcome! Your title is quite appropriate for Va. tonight. We are just about to freeze slap to death!lol

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

I like very much the image you painted in this short well written poem. It was a pleasure to read it.

A breezy summers day.
Precocious little boy.
Swinging from your vines.
The joys of childhood

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2010

thank u

reply by Pili Pubul on 04-Dec-2010

U welcome.

Comment from Tanya Ko

Excellent

I feel joy
I feel green
and I feel fresh and happy in this poem
I like this peaceful image- thank you for your beautiful image in this poem- what a happy childhood

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010

thank you im glad you liked it.

Comment from judy corcoran

Excellent

good luck with the contest...
i really like the images this conjures... but i wonder at the second line... is 'precautions' what you mean?
cheers
thanks for sharing
judy

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010

thank you yes i meant another word I fixed it thanks.

reply by judy corcoran on 03-Dec-2010

ah yes... :)

Comment from Magics02

Good

I really like this but may I say here please. You have two A's in both lines and I am not versed on this form so no expert here on it. In line two you have a precautions little boy ( did you mean precautious little boy) If nothing here you can use let me know as I would like to come back to re-review.

Blessings

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010

thank you

reply by Magics02 on 04-Dec-2010

You are welcome poet