Give A Gift Of Sweetness ... Aigner
Defined, decadent and delicious!61 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
So, you don't do prose, huh? Oh, but you have, and I found it!
This "Gift of Sweetness" little story was written with the same care and surgeon-like precision you approach your poetry with. I just KNEW you would be great at story writing. Truth be told, most exceptional poets are...
Aigner chocolates sound delectably delicious. Steeped in tradition and wholesome goodness, I think I'll run out right now and grab a box for the little woman!
Whu--what? You mean, it's not real? But, it sounded so good...
Excellent job, Gungalo!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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So, you don't do prose, huh? Oh, but you have, and I found it!
This "Gift of Sweetness" little story was written with the same care and surgeon-like precision you approach your poetry with. I just KNEW you would be great at story writing. Truth be told, most exceptional poets are...
Aigner chocolates sound delectably delicious. Steeped in tradition and wholesome goodness, I think I'll run out right now and grab a box for the little woman!
Whu--what? You mean, it's not real? But, it sounded so good...
Excellent job, Gungalo!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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Oh you search until you found one. And, Aigner Chocolates are real and oh so delicious. You'll do well to buy her these. LOL. Thanks you. This was done to win an advertising contest, which I didn't. LOL.
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You made me want to go out and get some, too, ha ha!
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Hehehe well tomorrow when you are out then. LOL
Comment from 7thpoet
Although the sale using description for these items was evident, there where still a few discrepancies in the wording, like "the giving of love from the heart" could be simply "the gift of love from the heart", thereby having the chocolate as the gift rather than love, hard to capture. Still an excellent ad/desc.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2010
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Although the sale using description for these items was evident, there where still a few discrepancies in the wording, like "the giving of love from the heart" could be simply "the gift of love from the heart", thereby having the chocolate as the gift rather than love, hard to capture. Still an excellent ad/desc.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2010
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Thank you. I rather like that. Too late to makes changes now as it's in the hands of the company for judging. I appreciate your comments on this and the suggestion.
Comment from Soledadpaz
I've never heard of this company or this product but based on your descriptive passages I want some, right now! I want to feel like a queen with chocolate melting in my mouth. MMMM! Delicious and decadent, to boot!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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I've never heard of this company or this product but based on your descriptive passages I want some, right now! I want to feel like a queen with chocolate melting in my mouth. MMMM! Delicious and decadent, to boot!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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LOL, yer so cute. Thanks for a great review of this one girl. Here's a big box of them for you!!!! MMMMMMMMMMMMM good!!!
Comment from sunny39
An excellent entry in the contest. Your words flow just like the silky chocolate you are presenting to the reader. I like the reference - 'from the forested hills...' this brings to forethought the wonderful ingredients of nature.
Good luck in the contest. This is a really good one!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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An excellent entry in the contest. Your words flow just like the silky chocolate you are presenting to the reader. I like the reference - 'from the forested hills...' this brings to forethought the wonderful ingredients of nature.
Good luck in the contest. This is a really good one!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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Thank you so much Sunny for a great review!!!
Comment from Joyce Laura Bailey
From the beginning of your words I could taste the delicacy
and smoothness of the chocolates. (I am a chocoholic)
There was a sensuality about your wording that perfectly
matched the product. Well done as always Gungalo.
Joyce
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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From the beginning of your words I could taste the delicacy
and smoothness of the chocolates. (I am a chocoholic)
There was a sensuality about your wording that perfectly
matched the product. Well done as always Gungalo.
Joyce
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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Thanks so much Joyce. A different write that I enjoyed doing!!!
Comment from marcellawachtel
I love the beginning 'forested hills' line It is beautiful, poetic, but I am afraid (I think the company gets to judge this one)it will put them off, it's too lyrical. The copy is perfect- makes people's mouth water, and presents the company in a good light. Maybe they will get the royalty/queens connection. I hope so. Great piece of writint!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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I love the beginning 'forested hills' line It is beautiful, poetic, but I am afraid (I think the company gets to judge this one)it will put them off, it's too lyrical. The copy is perfect- makes people's mouth water, and presents the company in a good light. Maybe they will get the royalty/queens connection. I hope so. Great piece of writint!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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LOL the company is in Forest Hills, N.Y. I think it'll be fine. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Thanks you.
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No,I know they're in Forest Hills. I just thought that just because when you are so accustomed to an address, you stop thinking about what it means.Like Brookhaven hasn't had a stream in 70 years. Who knows. Anyway - good luck in the contest.
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LOL thanks you and I know what you mean. Not sure Forest Hills has forests anymore or hills for that matter. LOL.
Comment from Earthwriter
made my mouth water thinking about it i thought you did a good job of conveying the sweet message of this piece of writing well done
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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made my mouth water thinking about it i thought you did a good job of conveying the sweet message of this piece of writing well done
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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Thanks so very much!!!
Comment from Victorian Lady
A very good job, promoting the chocolate! It makes me wish for some! I especially liked: "You will make their day in a wonderful way..." Also, good job making the chocolate appealing to the taste, and appealing to "the senses of love."
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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A very good job, promoting the chocolate! It makes me wish for some! I especially liked: "You will make their day in a wonderful way..." Also, good job making the chocolate appealing to the taste, and appealing to "the senses of love."
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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Thanks you!! A yummy review you left me ... indeed.
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Welcome! So where can I get some of that chocolate?
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Online, they have a website girl!!!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I sit here this afternoon, snacking on my vegemite cracker biscuits, then I read this. Somehow my biscuits don't quite taste the same now. By the time I had read this I could almost taste the choccies. Well done and good luck in the comp.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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I sit here this afternoon, snacking on my vegemite cracker biscuits, then I read this. Somehow my biscuits don't quite taste the same now. By the time I had read this I could almost taste the choccies. Well done and good luck in the comp.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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Thank you soooo much Pearl. A little cheating won't hurt!!
Comment from Irene D. Garces
I loved chocolates too. Even those made locally are good enough for me. How much more with this Aigner chocolates mentioned in your romance script. Hmmm I wish i could taste it too...
The artwork and the piece is sweet as a whole too. I loved it very much.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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I loved chocolates too. Even those made locally are good enough for me. How much more with this Aigner chocolates mentioned in your romance script. Hmmm I wish i could taste it too...
The artwork and the piece is sweet as a whole too. I loved it very much.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2010
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Thanks sweet one. Love what you said here and know what you mean. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
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You're welcome..
MUAHHHHHHH
