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Comment from dportwood
The magnificent birth of six percent babies
(The magnificent birth of six perfect babies)
Four went to all parts of the United States, Texas, California, Oregon and Florida, the other two, were sold to England and the last one to France.
(This would make too many babies - six were born and the parents have one)
Duane
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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The magnificent birth of six percent babies
(The magnificent birth of six perfect babies)
Four went to all parts of the United States, Texas, California, Oregon and Florida, the other two, were sold to England and the last one to France.
(This would make too many babies - six were born and the parents have one)
Duane
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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thank you so much, for your help too
Comment from Ann Smith
I wonder what will happen when and if the parents find out there was more than one baby. The children have brothers and sisters they may never know about. Unfortunately this happens more than we realize. Again good detail and suspense that keeps the story moving. ann
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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I wonder what will happen when and if the parents find out there was more than one baby. The children have brothers and sisters they may never know about. Unfortunately this happens more than we realize. Again good detail and suspense that keeps the story moving. ann
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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so true
Comment from bhogg
six percent babies (perfect babies)
check your math - four + two + one = 7.
I'm interested to see where this story goes. I'm assuming this is not the last.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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six percent babies (perfect babies)
check your math - four + two + one = 7.
I'm interested to see where this story goes. I'm assuming this is not the last.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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I changed the wording on that twice, I knew it sounded wrong, I will rewrite, the last two meant they were sent over seas
Comment from harleyangelbrat
This is a great story. I have enjoyed reading it. But, you have a few mistakes in this part. You wrote percent babies instead of perfect babies. You said there were six babies, but you sent four to the U.S. and two to England and one to France. That makes seven. I just thought you should know. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is an excellent read. God bless you!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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This is a great story. I have enjoyed reading it. But, you have a few mistakes in this part. You wrote percent babies instead of perfect babies. You said there were six babies, but you sent four to the U.S. and two to England and one to France. That makes seven. I just thought you should know. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is an excellent read. God bless you!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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sorry, need to fix, one to england and one to france
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No problem. I hope you have a blessed day. Marilyn
Comment from bluedragon776
This is so shocking. Not just the black market baby selling but also the fact that someone could deliver 6 babies. Also it is hard enough to give up 1 little baby, let alone 6?! Good Job.
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This is so shocking. Not just the black market baby selling but also the fact that someone could deliver 6 babies. Also it is hard enough to give up 1 little baby, let alone 6?! Good Job.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
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thank you so so much
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Okay, but I can't believe someone at the hospital didn't talk. The hospitals are one of the largest rumor mills around. Six babies being born will certainly hit the news wires within 24 hours.
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Okay, but I can't believe someone at the hospital didn't talk. The hospitals are one of the largest rumor mills around. Six babies being born will certainly hit the news wires within 24 hours.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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this really was not a hospital, it was a birth place for making money illigal.
