The Starting Point
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "A stranger"A lonely Call Girl
14 total reviews
Comment from Ponder
Hi Weird Grace,
I read the last chapter first and thought it weas interesting and came back to read from the start. I think this is a very interesting story, this chapter is eerie and has a good descriptive quality.
A nice start,
Jules
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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Hi Weird Grace,
I read the last chapter first and thought it weas interesting and came back to read from the start. I think this is a very interesting story, this chapter is eerie and has a good descriptive quality.
A nice start,
Jules
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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thank you again
Comment from Rafaqat Bano
hi
it is good starting of the first chapetr ...it is also interesting and someone feels need more to know as what will happen next to the story...it is also simple and good story one ... ....it seem as all the chapters have different stories as yet i do not go through the other chapters except chapter 5......well done as usuall ....i appreciate your work for its simplicity.....thanks for sharing it ...
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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hi
it is good starting of the first chapetr ...it is also interesting and someone feels need more to know as what will happen next to the story...it is also simple and good story one ... ....it seem as all the chapters have different stories as yet i do not go through the other chapters except chapter 5......well done as usuall ....i appreciate your work for its simplicity.....thanks for sharing it ...
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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you are so welcome and thank you so much
Comment from harleyangelbrat
Wow, this is great. It kept my interest and left me wanting more. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is expressive and descriptive which makes for a wonderful read. God bless you!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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Wow, this is great. It kept my interest and left me wanting more. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is expressive and descriptive which makes for a wonderful read. God bless you!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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thank you
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You are welcome. Have a blessed day. Marilyn
Comment from Tellis
Aha, another alien to give the hooker a way out of her present life, I hope. I enjoyed reading this excellent chapter.
Tellis
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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Aha, another alien to give the hooker a way out of her present life, I hope. I enjoyed reading this excellent chapter.
Tellis
Comment Written 05-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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true, thank you
Comment from rmdelta
Grace,
man, you're on a roll, my friend. Another wonderful story completely filled with great descriptives which provide strong imagery. Nice work, Grace
Reggie
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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Grace,
man, you're on a roll, my friend. Another wonderful story completely filled with great descriptives which provide strong imagery. Nice work, Grace
Reggie
Comment Written 05-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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so glad thank you
Comment from koyoga
Great mystery and intrique. Yes, my interest is
peaked and I'm left with a ton of questions. I
can't wait to see where this might lead.
Great job!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
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Great mystery and intrique. Yes, my interest is
peaked and I'm left with a ton of questions. I
can't wait to see where this might lead.
Great job!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
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so so glad
Comment from Readywriter52
The story has a promising beginning. The naked man peaked my interest. I am curious on how he will affect the woman's life. Will he be able to save her?
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
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The story has a promising beginning. The naked man peaked my interest. I am curious on how he will affect the woman's life. Will he be able to save her?
Comment Written 05-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
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thank you my friend.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh dear, now we have naked men dropping from the sky. Ok, I will see where this is headed. It should be interesting. I hope he speaks English.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
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Oh dear, now we have naked men dropping from the sky. Ok, I will see where this is headed. It should be interesting. I hope he speaks English.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
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me too, haha
Comment from Realist101
AN ALIEN! Oh good. This is neat Grace! Sounds like this will be a real thrilling story, I will do my best to keep up with you!! ") GOOD one here! Susan
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
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AN ALIEN! Oh good. This is neat Grace! Sounds like this will be a real thrilling story, I will do my best to keep up with you!! ") GOOD one here! Susan
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
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thank you so much more to come
Comment from Gert sherwood
Good Evening wierdgrace,
Talk about you getting ones' full attention.
You have done it
So a naked man appeared from outer space.
Sounds like he doesn't have any money in his pockets
Good luck with you sci-fic story.
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
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Good Evening wierdgrace,
Talk about you getting ones' full attention.
You have done it
So a naked man appeared from outer space.
Sounds like he doesn't have any money in his pockets
Good luck with you sci-fic story.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
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good, tried too, thank you so much
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You are welcome
Gert
