Never Book A Judge By His Cover
A Contest Entry10 total reviews
Comment from MercyWrites
Your title caught my eye. Interesting use of the contest words. Your description was fun to read especially this part.His large ass squeezed desperately into a pink jersey dress with bows, arrows, and hearts on it. The only thing I saw that didn't sound right. They were bringing his fiancee into his courtroom. I'm almost certain that he would have been dismissed from the case on the grounds that he knew the defendant.
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Your title caught my eye. Interesting use of the contest words. Your description was fun to read especially this part.His large ass squeezed desperately into a pink jersey dress with bows, arrows, and hearts on it. The only thing I saw that didn't sound right. They were bringing his fiancee into his courtroom. I'm almost certain that he would have been dismissed from the case on the grounds that he knew the defendant.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thanks so much for the great review and stars. You're right; he probably would've been recused- if he told anyone. Thanks for the good wishes in the contest.
Comment from Rama Rao
I liked your take on the theme for the contest. Yes, the judges wear a gown when they sit in judgement.
They hide many things under it.
They are also human with their weaknesses, some weird.
Wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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I liked your take on the theme for the contest. Yes, the judges wear a gown when they sit in judgement.
They hide many things under it.
They are also human with their weaknesses, some weird.
Wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thanks so much for the wonderful review and stars. You are one of the few who actually got it. Thanks for the good wishes in the contest.
Comment from btruax
This is the best entry for this contest that I have read yet. Great twist as well as using all the words. Good luck on the contest.
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This is the best entry for this contest that I have read yet. Great twist as well as using all the words. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thanks so much for your wonderful review and five star rating. I'm so happy you thought it was th best entry. Thank you, too, for the good wishes in the contet.
Comment from Krugerrand
LOL! Hilarious imagery going on there with the judge dressed to the nines.
This line was great, had so many meanings to it: Not one single person would believe the balancing act he could do in black five inch heels.
Wonderful job!
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LOL! Hilarious imagery going on there with the judge dressed to the nines.
This line was great, had so many meanings to it: Not one single person would believe the balancing act he could do in black five inch heels.
Wonderful job!
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thank you for the great review and the wonderful rating. I'm so glad you enjoy this. It was fun to write.
Comment from wierdgrace
wow, so much emotional feeling and it shows the emotions in the words you have written, perfect for this contest, and found no errors and no revisions, good luck in the contest.
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wow, so much emotional feeling and it shows the emotions in the words you have written, perfect for this contest, and found no errors and no revisions, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thanks so much for the great review and stars. I'm glad you enjoyed the read. It was so much fun to write. Thanks, too, for the good wishes in the contest.
Comment from Judian James
Oh, naughty, naughty cross-dressing Judge. I couldn't resist reading after seeing the title. This was another really clever take on the word list and not at all cliched!
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Oh, naughty, naughty cross-dressing Judge. I couldn't resist reading after seeing the title. This was another really clever take on the word list and not at all cliched!
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thank you so much for reading this and your great review and rating. I enjoyed writing this one. So glad it wasn't cliched. Thanks also for the good wishes in the contest.
Comment from Connie P
Great entry for the contest. There are some very inventive entries and yours is up there with the best. Great use of the words and sticking within the word count.
Connie
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Great entry for the contest. There are some very inventive entries and yours is up there with the best. Great use of the words and sticking within the word count.
Connie
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Thanks so much for your wonderful review and star rating. I'm very happy you enjoyed the story; it was a lot of fun to write. Thanks also for the good wishes in the contest.
Comment from closetpoetjester
Nice job on this entry. Good plot and excellent narratives throughout the story. I think this is a strong chance and I found it quite a compelling read. I hope the that judge gets whats coming to them somewhere down the track. A great well written tale and good luck in the contest.
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Nice job on this entry. Good plot and excellent narratives throughout the story. I think this is a strong chance and I found it quite a compelling read. I hope the that judge gets whats coming to them somewhere down the track. A great well written tale and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thanks for the great review and stars. I appreciate it. Thanks too, for the good wishes in the contest.
Comment from Mariea
A well written short story with a hell bent message. Thorough editing without any clutter or spags. Easy to follow. Good luck in the comp.
Have a great day, regards Mia
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A well written short story with a hell bent message. Thorough editing without any clutter or spags. Easy to follow. Good luck in the comp.
Have a great day, regards Mia
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thank you so much for the great review and stars. Thanks also for the good wishes in the contest.
Comment from Earthwriter
excellent job i have tried my hand in this restrictive style and i know how hard it can be excellent job my friend i enjoyed it immensely
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excellent job i have tried my hand in this restrictive style and i know how hard it can be excellent job my friend i enjoyed it immensely
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thank you so much for the wonderful rating and stars. I really appreciate it.