What are friends for?
Two mates out on the prowl35 total reviews
Comment from Metal Head
I've read all the entries for this contest, and none of them have caught me out quite like this one.
An enjoyable read that deserves to do well. Best wishes with the contest.
Regards
Michael D
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2010
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I've read all the entries for this contest, and none of them have caught me out quite like this one.
An enjoyable read that deserves to do well. Best wishes with the contest.
Regards
Michael D
Comment Written 24-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2010
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Hi Michael, thank you for your great review and best wishes. I am pleased you enjoyed. Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from MissMerri
Excellent! A truly funny story, told all in dialogue. I know this isn't easy to do. You did an outstanding job. The little surprise at the end was just perfect. Hahaha!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Excellent! A truly funny story, told all in dialogue. I know this isn't easy to do. You did an outstanding job. The little surprise at the end was just perfect. Hahaha!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Hi Merri, thank you for your review, I am pleased you enjoyed the little twist at the end. Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from Carol D Parker
Great dialogue that carries the story
along nicely. I hope this isn't a true
story. Imagine a guy hitting on his
own mother. The writing is very well
done and very creative. Nothing to
correct. Nice job. Good luck in the
comp.
Delora
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Great dialogue that carries the story
along nicely. I hope this isn't a true
story. Imagine a guy hitting on his
own mother. The writing is very well
done and very creative. Nothing to
correct. Nice job. Good luck in the
comp.
Delora
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Thank you Delora, for your generous review and rating. Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from BlueJamme
Oh my God. What a cringeworthy scenario to paint here.
You did excellently to set the scene and tell the story with just dialogue, and I could completely empathise with the characters. No spag to report either.
BlueJamme
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Oh my God. What a cringeworthy scenario to paint here.
You did excellently to set the scene and tell the story with just dialogue, and I could completely empathise with the characters. No spag to report either.
BlueJamme
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Hi BlueJamme. Thank you for your kind review and generous rating. I am pleased you enjoyed! Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from sgalletti
Hi Marijke! Great, funny twist at the end...I am enjoying reading all of the entries in this dialogue contest. Your dialogue is well written and a worthy entry in this contest. Bolding lines helped the read...Best of luck! Sue
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Hi Marijke! Great, funny twist at the end...I am enjoying reading all of the entries in this dialogue contest. Your dialogue is well written and a worthy entry in this contest. Bolding lines helped the read...Best of luck! Sue
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Hi Sue, yes, there are some great entries here, are there not? Thank you for your kind review and generous rating. Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
LOL not what I expected for the ending very funny a good contest entry I enjoyed well done and good luck regards Fuller
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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LOL not what I expected for the ending very funny a good contest entry I enjoyed well done and good luck regards Fuller
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Hi Fuller. Thank you for your kind review and generous rating. I am pleased you enjoyed! Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from anabelle
LOL! I'm having so much fun reviewing these dialogues, I can't believe what a fabulous job you've done. This is great. Son hits on mother at bar. Yes, that is very embarassing.
Best of luck in the contest.
Regards, anabelle
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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LOL! I'm having so much fun reviewing these dialogues, I can't believe what a fabulous job you've done. This is great. Son hits on mother at bar. Yes, that is very embarassing.
Best of luck in the contest.
Regards, anabelle
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Hi Anabelle. Thank you for your kind review and generous rating. I am pleased you enjoyed! Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from resilke
Thank you for sharing your story. This is well written and to the point. Lots of dialogue always helps to enhance a story as you've used. Good character development. Lots of memorable moments. Good ideas. Creative. Entertaining. Keep writing. All best
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Thank you for sharing your story. This is well written and to the point. Lots of dialogue always helps to enhance a story as you've used. Good character development. Lots of memorable moments. Good ideas. Creative. Entertaining. Keep writing. All best
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Hi resilike. Thank you for your kind review and generous rating. I am pleased you enjoyed! Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from Dustman6180
This is a very funny, well written entry to the dialogue only contest. At first, I thought it was going to be a man in drag -- but mom is even funnier. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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This is a very funny, well written entry to the dialogue only contest. At first, I thought it was going to be a man in drag -- but mom is even funnier. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Hi Dustman. Thank you for your kind review and generous rating. I am pleased you enjoyed! It is amazing how many thought it would be a mab in drag - that's why it isn't - too obvious! Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from Sally Carter
Hahaha, never saw that coming for one moment! There have been several mistaken identity tales, but this one really takes the biscuit! Loved it.
Clear, convincing, no spags, easy to read. I have a few to go, but you are topping my poll so far. And you managed to have nothing but dialogue, which not all the entries have done.
Big round of applause to Marijke!
Sally
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Hahaha, never saw that coming for one moment! There have been several mistaken identity tales, but this one really takes the biscuit! Loved it.
Clear, convincing, no spags, easy to read. I have a few to go, but you are topping my poll so far. And you managed to have nothing but dialogue, which not all the entries have done.
Big round of applause to Marijke!
Sally
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Thank you Sally, and I am so pleased you enjoyed. I enjoyed writing it. The twist didn't hit me until I just about finished. Thanks for your fun review and warmest regards, my friend. Marijke
