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Buzzing for Action

She had a plan.......

45 total reviews 
Comment from unidian
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Brings a whole new meaning to the birds and, in Simone's case, the bees:) As someone said, the best laid plans. She must have been happy to find he still wanted to marry an 'exhibitionist' LOL Nice one, Carol. Tom

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
    Tom,

    Ouch! An exhibitionist...well, maybe just a tad bit....A long long time ago this story had a bit of truth to it....Glad you enjoyed. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from warbler
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This is a great story and it's full of action. I enjoyed the way the story kept building until the end. It was full of humor. Well done!

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
    warbler,

    Thank you so much for your kind and generous comments. I appreciate it very much. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Border Reiver
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She unzipped her skirt, letting It fall to the ground.(Change the I in it to lower case).

An amusing and original story! I'm assuming that when he kissed her he couldn't actually hug her as she would be too sore! Poor girl!

Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
    Border Reiver

    Thank you for enjoying the story. I appreciate your comments. CArol
Comment from ladybird
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Ouch! A very nice short story.As they say 'the best laid plans of mice and men', lol. Even though this is a short, the charcter came across strong.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
    ladybird,

    Yes, the best laid plans are often botch considerable. Thank you for the kind comments. Smiles to you, Carol
reply by ladybird on 16-Feb-2010
    You're welcome.
Comment from fionageorge
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Carol, what a great and fun Valentine Day story. Ouch, those bees can be nasty! I have a real fear of bees, so can only imagine how disturbing a swarm would be.
Good luck in the contest.
Warmest regards and hugs
Marijke

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
    Marijke,

    so do I ...since they chased me all over the place...Smiles to you, CArol
Comment from blsdauthor
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I love your writing! Incredible story. Of course as one reads I began to think Simone was crazy not to knock on the door and question him being home. Yet as I continued to read I believed this would have happened to me. Incredible! Keep it up.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2010
    blsdauthor,

    She wanted to surprise him with the outfit...They both got a surprise for sure! Thanks for the awesome comments and review...Your generous offering of stars is absolutely awesome! Smiles, CArol
reply by blsdauthor on 16-Feb-2010
    He surprised her more!
Comment from kellyolsen
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I enjoyed your story. You have a good imagination, and your descriptive language added to that. It met all the requirements of the contest, and everyone loves a happy ending. Sweet. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
    Kelly,

    Glad you enjoyed this little story. I appreciate your generous comments. Smiles to you, CArol
Comment from jmdg1954
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Very nicely and humorously done...
a great entry into the contest, with a story that I could actually see happening.
Also, a happy ending... (maybe later on)
good luck in the contest.. John

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
    John,

    there's a bit of truth in this story...a long long time ago. Thank you for your generous comments...Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from Thesis
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That was a cute story, Carol. I liked how the misunderstanding turned into such a fiasco. The idea of the bee stings was priceless.

Good luck in the contest. - John

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
    Johyn,

    Long long ago, I think there was a bit of truth to this story...Smiles to you, CArol
Comment from L.lora
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Oh Carol, this was just too
perfect. Just truly shows you
how women and men process things
differently and end up with the
wrong conclusions. This was spot
on from start to finish. no nits
or spags. Lora

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
    Lora,

    So glad you enjoyed this one...Bits of it were true from ages and ages ago...Smiles to you, CArol