Wrong Email Address
An Honest Mistake Creates Havoc32 total reviews
Comment from warbler
Your story was very humorous. I love the picture. What a difference one number can make. The last line was the perfect ending, "You're on your own, dude!"
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
  |
Your story was very humorous. I love the picture. What a difference one number can make. The last line was the perfect ending, "You're on your own, dude!"
Comment Written 15-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
-
HI, warbler. Yeah, lol, this guy is in deep trouble. - Thesis
Comment from rogerpolly
A really funny story. You captured all the right emotions this guy was experiencing, from lust to bust. Enjoyed reading along.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
|
A really funny story. You captured all the right emotions this guy was experiencing, from lust to bust. Enjoyed reading along.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
-
Thanks for reading my story. I'm happy you got a chuckle. This guy is in trouble, lol. - Thesis
Comment from Border Reiver
A little punctuation/type error here: On Valentine(')s Day, I received an attachment to her email.
That's fantastic. Very original and amusing. You're definitely a top contender in the competition!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
|
A little punctuation/type error here: On Valentine(')s Day, I received an attachment to her email.
That's fantastic. Very original and amusing. You're definitely a top contender in the competition!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
-
Thsnkd for your wonderful review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. - Thesis
Comment from Begin Again
Oh John....
This was a delicious story, filled with humor and a great...well, that might not be the appropriate word, but a surprise for the lead character...Very humorous...
Carol
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
|
Oh John....
This was a delicious story, filled with humor and a great...well, that might not be the appropriate word, but a surprise for the lead character...Very humorous...
Carol
Comment Written 15-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
-
Thanks, Carol. This guy needs to change his email address, lol. - John
Comment from fionageorge
An interesting slant on this contest, and well written.
Very funny, great use of dialogue, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Warmest regards
Marijke
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
|
An interesting slant on this contest, and well written.
Very funny, great use of dialogue, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment Written 15-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
-
HI, Marijke. Thanks for reading and for your comments. I appreciate them. - John
Comment from kellyolsen
This was a fun and well written story, and the picture you put up, makes it even funnier, because now there is a ring of truth to the story (why else would you just have this picture...that's alright, don't try to explain. hahaha) One correction you may want to consider..."The picture he sent, show - his gorgeous cousin with long blonde hair, a fantastic figure and sexy green eyes, made me drool." This small change makes the sentence complete and makes it flow a little better. Other than that, it met all the requirement of the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
|
This was a fun and well written story, and the picture you put up, makes it even funnier, because now there is a ring of truth to the story (why else would you just have this picture...that's alright, don't try to explain. hahaha) One correction you may want to consider..."The picture he sent, show
Comment Written 15-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
-
Thanks, Kelly. I refuse to incriminate myself, lol. I appreciate you reading my story and for the suggestion. I'm glad you got a chuckle out of the story. - John
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Way too funny. You had me laughing throughout the post. Very good. If you have any mechanical errors, I missed them with the tears in my eyes from laughing. Better luck, next time.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010
|
Way too funny. You had me laughing throughout the post. Very good. If you have any mechanical errors, I missed them with the tears in my eyes from laughing. Better luck, next time.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010
-
Thanks, Barbara. It was a hoot to write. I think he has to change his email address, probably even move, lol. I appreciate your comments. - John
Comment from bookishfabler
This was very funny. I honestly thought that his friend was playing a joke on him. Here are a few nits to look at.
and sexy green eyes, made me drool. He (which made me drool)
to know her a little, before we met.(No comma)
With our hormones racing(,) our conversations were becoming R rated and
girlfriend in High School. How cool is this(?)
Use lowercase for high school. only capital when a name of a school. Hope this is helpful
hugs
book
 |
This was very funny. I honestly thought that his friend was playing a joke on him. Here are a few nits to look at.
and sexy green eyes, made me drool. He (which made me drool)
to know her a little, before we met.(No comma)
With our hormones racing(,) our conversations were becoming R rated and
girlfriend in High School. How cool is this(?)
Use lowercase for high school. only capital when a name of a school. Hope this is helpful
hugs
book
Comment Written 13-Feb-2010
Comment from Cooper Watt
Priceless!!
LOL. Dude, seriously, what a horror show that would be. To think you're getting all sexually aroused and find out you've been talking to a guy the whole time! Gives me the heebie-jeebies just thinking about it.
Good luck with the contest, my friend. Well done.
Coop.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010
|
Priceless!!
LOL. Dude, seriously, what a horror show that would be. To think you're getting all sexually aroused and find out you've been talking to a guy the whole time! Gives me the heebie-jeebies just thinking about it.
Good luck with the contest, my friend. Well done.
Coop.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010
-
Thanks, Coop. I know. It's so wrong on so many levels, lol. - John
Comment from abno
Too funny. Has happened to me at least a dozen times this week. I think emailing should stop, because it makes you do and say things you aren't allowed to say and do. It's crazy, ne?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010
|
Too funny. Has happened to me at least a dozen times this week. I think emailing should stop, because it makes you do and say things you aren't allowed to say and do. It's crazy, ne?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010
-
It can be a dangerously interesting place. Thanks for your review. - Thesis
