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Invisible Friend

A childhood friend

42 total reviews 
Comment from Dave Russell
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Wonderful little poem about such a "big" friend. :) I have had my mix breed Sidney for 12 years now, not sure what I would do without her. They are always there for us without judgement.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2011

reply by the author on 13-Nov-2011
    Thank you for your great review and the reminder of our loyal friends in fur!
Comment from pugdogy
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excellent work!!! I really enjoyed reading this piece of work, it is so whimsicle and everyone can relate to the imaginary friends of childhood. the picture goes along perfectly. keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
    Thank you for the great review. Isn't it amazing that children that have imaginary friends are ok, but as adults that means we are crazy?! Again thanks.
Comment from misscookie
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The picyure along is a ****** rating you chose the correct picyure for your poem. which is so lovely I can tell by your writting you care for animals' this is a good write

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
    This picture looks exactly like my imaginary furry friend. Thank you for the great review.
Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi GentleWind...the picture you chose to enhance your poem is priceless. I have a little dog that always forgives my faults and is there beside me when I feel bad. Even though comes/thumb don't rhyme the couplets are well done and musical....blessings....chey

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
    The picture looks exactly like my imaginary friend. Yes, mine was always beside me when I cried and was upset. Thank you for the great review.
Comment from melbuy
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That is so sweet, so many children have a wonderful "friend" that only they can see and speak to. This little beagle is a great friend to keep this child feeling safe alone in bed.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
    Yes, I am glad I had Peaches. Thank you for a great review.
Comment from Xylok
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its no surprise this has an all time best ribbon by it; its adorable. but it is also technically sound as well, which makes it evern better. universal appeal this poem has; all who review this will probably indicate they enjoyed it. good job.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
    Thank you for your nice words and the great review.
Comment from adewpearl
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day's end - add the apostrophe
An invisible friend in beagle form - children certainly can conjure up that which they wish and long for :-) This is sweet as this special canine friend comforts the child who is falling asleep :-) Lovely flow and strong rhymes enhance your poem. Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
    Thank you so much for reading my poem and your correction. Hope you enjoyed the poem as much as I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for the great rating.
Comment from knowledge
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This is a cute poem. I have very seldom heard of an invisible animal friend, except for Pete's Dragon and Harvey the rabbit.

Thank You My Friend,

Knowledge

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
    The invisible Peaches stands in good company! Thank you for reading and the great rating.
Comment from Jordan Rose
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Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. It really spoke to me as it reminded me that I had 2 imaginary friends before I had siblings- a dog and a cat who apparently were very heavy, yet they fit in my pockets! It drove my grandmother nuts everytime I made her feed them, too! Great job. Jordan

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
    How cute!I am happy to bring back these wonderful memories for you. Thank you for reading and the great rating.
Comment from Josipher32
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GentleWind,

"Invisible Friend" was a well written children's poem. The vocabulary choices were targeted correctly for children and the artwork is something all children would love to visualize.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
    Thank you so much for the great rating and taking time to read. Wasn't "puppy's" face just adorable!