Tomorrow Never Comes
Time Stood Still34 total reviews
Comment from Sonya Florentino
a very short piece but very powerful....you talk about a lost day....and lost lives....and lost tomorrows...
i like that you don't know exactly what the piece will be about (despite the title)...
an anti-war peace that's subtle for not lacking in power...
much said in not too many words...great write....
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2009
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a very short piece but very powerful....you talk about a lost day....and lost lives....and lost tomorrows...
i like that you don't know exactly what the piece will be about (despite the title)...
an anti-war peace that's subtle for not lacking in power...
much said in not too many words...great write....
Comment Written 15-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2009
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Comment from joan marie
Very interesting entry. It's good when you have been allowed diversity. This created quite a large image with it's words. Good luck. joan marie
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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Very interesting entry. It's good when you have been allowed diversity. This created quite a large image with it's words. Good luck. joan marie
Comment Written 23-Sep-2009
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Comment from lerkun
hello there, this is a good little story with some great imagery and a thought provoking finish
i did think met worked better here.. meet seemed to be a tense change
horizon where clouds meet the sea.
other than that, nice clean write,
b well and good luck
lerk
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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hello there, this is a good little story with some great imagery and a thought provoking finish
i did think met worked better here.. meet seemed to be a tense change
horizon where clouds meet the sea.
other than that, nice clean write,
b well and good luck
lerk
Comment Written 23-Sep-2009
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Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Your story is well written. The flow is at a good pace, complete with a beginning, middle and ending.
Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Your story is well written. The flow is at a good pace, complete with a beginning, middle and ending.
Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
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Comment from WRITER1
A very good flash fiction piece. It is a story that everyone can understand. Being in a war is never a good thing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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A very good flash fiction piece. It is a story that everyone can understand. Being in a war is never a good thing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello fastdigits
Now here is a 100 word story I enjoyed and also learend something from your notes.
Excellent use of the required words
I wish you the best in this contest.
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Hello fastdigits
Now here is a 100 word story I enjoyed and also learend something from your notes.
Excellent use of the required words
I wish you the best in this contest.
Gert
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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you are welcome fastdigits
Gert
Comment from Mastery
Outstanding, digits...you have no need to worry about this one or have any concerns...I think yours beats mine, hands down..Very nice tribute to the sailors and Marines aboard. Good luck...bob
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Outstanding, digits...you have no need to worry about this one or have any concerns...I think yours beats mine, hands down..Very nice tribute to the sailors and Marines aboard. Good luck...bob
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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As always, thank you for stopping by. I wrote this one with you in mind, knew you would know what I was writing about.
I guess I'll go back to writing love poems.
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LOL...Now, now...you are going to win this one my friend...Bet? Bob
Comment from sgalletti
I am reviewing all of these 100 word entries before voting. Yours is well written and tells a complete story with a powerful message. As a poet and person who enters six word stories (and believes they are even more difficult to write than the 100 word stories) I am intrigued by this particular contest. Best of luck. Sue
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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I am reviewing all of these 100 word entries before voting. Yours is well written and tells a complete story with a powerful message. As a poet and person who enters six word stories (and believes they are even more difficult to write than the 100 word stories) I am intrigued by this particular contest. Best of luck. Sue
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
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Thank you for stopping by and for your kind review, and I am inclined to agree with you as to which is more difficult.
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Comment from sfharper
The attitude change in the character strongly tells the different view, post-war of madness. It leaves the reader feeling sad and sure of so much loss and yet the strong ship is so weak without all the men. Good work.
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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The attitude change in the character strongly tells the different view, post-war of madness. It leaves the reader feeling sad and sure of so much loss and yet the strong ship is so weak without all the men. Good work.
:)
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
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Comment from zeezeewriter
A sad commentary of war. I loved the way you brought us into the scene and held up for the moment. Great job. Good luck in the contest. Zee Zee
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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A sad commentary of war. I loved the way you brought us into the scene and held up for the moment. Great job. Good luck in the contest. Zee Zee
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
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