Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

this might have been entitled the roar of a peaceful warrior. I enjoyed reading and writing a review for this well written verse... John

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

Comment from DecrepitOldBag

Excellent

How lovely to have something of yours to read again. I have missed your poems! It seems ages since I've read a new post of yours.
This poem is great, truly an encouraging, strong shout to the world.
Great writing.
Warmest wishes
Kat

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is an upbeat poem about perservering and going forward
against life's challenges. This has a good beat to it and brings up good feelings.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

Comment from Alexander E Poet

Excellent

. I thought it was very insightful and telling. well done. This poem shows and illusions life what a very philosophical and imaginative. I love the content and images. smooth readingI look forward to your next one Alexander QQ...

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

Comment from josejodar

Excellent

That's an amazing poem. I like a lot the use that you have done of the french term "esprit de corp" and the meaning it has in your poem!Congratulations and best regards!

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

Comment from RaymondJohn

Good

You're not going quietly into the gentle night, eh. Good for you. I'm not sure how espirit de corps works into this, but I like your spirit. Very energetic writing. Ray.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

Comment from findingmyroom

Excellent

Hi, Sue, glad to see you posting again. Your imagery is moving and poignant, and the movement in your artwork matches perfectly. Dynamite line: "As victory in bleakness is nigh."

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

Comment from Rabianabian

Excellent

A really excellent poem. I don't have any suggestions--the flow is perfect, the rhyming is great. There were no spelling or grammar mistakes. Well done.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

Comment from DreamChaser

Excellent

What a wonderful attitude towards life and all that comes our way. Faith and perseverance are two of the greatest conquerors
I know of. I especially like the lines, "When in the depths I'll always rise". It gives such a warm feeling of peace and confidence. It's been a pleasure to review your work again.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

Comment from Amfunny

Excellent

Great poem. I liked it and enjoyed reading and reviewing this piece. I think we all have our own battle cry. :) Nicely done. Great art too.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009