CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from FredCollingwood
Am I seeing right? Is this your first poem in about a month? Your fans are probably having withdrawals. Great job with this one.
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Am I seeing right? Is this your first poem in about a month? Your fans are probably having withdrawals. Great job with this one.
Comment Written 12-May-2009
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
You've surely nailed it. Fabulous poem and you've used all the words required except sell, but sell is not needed. Succinct and to the point as usual. I love your poetry.
Warm wishes
Kat
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You've surely nailed it. Fabulous poem and you've used all the words required except sell, but sell is not needed. Succinct and to the point as usual. I love your poetry.
Warm wishes
Kat
Comment Written 29-Apr-2009
Comment from fayesh
You did a great job with the words provided. I thought you expressed the two strongest human emotions very well in concise, meaningful rhymes.
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You did a great job with the words provided. I thought you expressed the two strongest human emotions very well in concise, meaningful rhymes.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2009
Comment from amada
You did a very good job with the six words allowed. The message you constructed is inspiring and oh, so truthful. I like your writings, always you tell the truth.
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You did a very good job with the six words allowed. The message you constructed is inspiring and oh, so truthful. I like your writings, always you tell the truth.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2009
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ...
You have very cleverly incorporated all the prescribed
words in such a short and yet meaningful piece of free-thought writing and I enjoyed reading what you have presented as an entry in the Contest - in which, I wish you well.
There is nothing to suggest changing and I thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from ... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Sixteezkid ...
You have very cleverly incorporated all the prescribed
words in such a short and yet meaningful piece of free-thought writing and I enjoyed reading what you have presented as an entry in the Contest - in which, I wish you well.
There is nothing to suggest changing and I thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2009
Comment from NightWriter
Bravo! "We Fall" is a masterpiece. Perfectly written and stated. Poem reads like a short song with perfect rhythm and rhyming. Well done.
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Bravo! "We Fall" is a masterpiece. Perfectly written and stated. Poem reads like a short song with perfect rhythm and rhyming. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2009
Comment from photopoet
Oh, the agony and the ecstasy of love, captured very well in a surprisingly short piece using the required words. Fabulous artwork to complete the presentation. I liked it!
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Oh, the agony and the ecstasy of love, captured very well in a surprisingly short piece using the required words. Fabulous artwork to complete the presentation. I liked it!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2009
Comment from Freeflyer
It is very difficult to take listed words, incorporate them into sentences and make it all come together in rhyme and reason. Especially in a short verse. You have done extremely well. Good luck in the competition.
Freeflyer
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It is very difficult to take listed words, incorporate them into sentences and make it all come together in rhyme and reason. Especially in a short verse. You have done extremely well. Good luck in the competition.
Freeflyer
Comment Written 28-Apr-2009
Comment from Pen&Ink
Hello Sue,
It happens. You describe the feelings quite well. You managed to work in the requisite number of listed words. I find it most proper that you chose not to choose the word "sell". Somehow it seems the most difficult to reconcile with the others. Great poem.
Ray
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Hello Sue,
It happens. You describe the feelings quite well. You managed to work in the requisite number of listed words. I find it most proper that you chose not to choose the word "sell". Somehow it seems the most difficult to reconcile with the others. Great poem.
Ray
Comment Written 28-Apr-2009
Comment from Rottie
Bravo!! I love this! I thought this was going to be a "sappy" contest. You know, mushy love poems, but this surpasses all that. Simple, direct, yet musical in a way. Maintains a steady beat. You have a winner here I think!
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Bravo!! I love this! I thought this was going to be a "sappy" contest. You know, mushy love poems, but this surpasses all that. Simple, direct, yet musical in a way. Maintains a steady beat. You have a winner here I think!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2009