CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from the_desolate_one
so many people get stuck in their daily routine and their comfort zone that they do not take advantage of their free will... thank you for articulating and reminding us of it
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so many people get stuck in their daily routine and their comfort zone that they do not take advantage of their free will... thank you for articulating and reminding us of it
Comment Written 21-Apr-2009
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ...
You have cleverly woven your theme into this Triolet format and I enjoyed reading what you have written.
There is nothing to suggest changing and I thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Sixteezkid ...
You have cleverly woven your theme into this Triolet format and I enjoyed reading what you have written.
There is nothing to suggest changing and I thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009
Comment from E Vin Smyth
This poem is very well done. A poem like this in my opinion is very difficult to do well, because you have to worry about too many rules, so it's easy for the message to get lost. I think you avoided this trap.
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This poem is very well done. A poem like this in my opinion is very difficult to do well, because you have to worry about too many rules, so it's easy for the message to get lost. I think you avoided this trap.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009
Comment from bard owl
This is a very eye-opening piece, Sue. I think generally people don't think about being born with free will and that it is such a wonderful gift from God. The differences in us all should be celebrated, for none of us is exactly alike yet all are in the image of God. I read this poem twice to absorb what you said. I loved it! Encouraging individuality is to be applauded. Excellent. Blessings to you and best of luck in the contest, Linda
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This is a very eye-opening piece, Sue. I think generally people don't think about being born with free will and that it is such a wonderful gift from God. The differences in us all should be celebrated, for none of us is exactly alike yet all are in the image of God. I read this poem twice to absorb what you said. I loved it! Encouraging individuality is to be applauded. Excellent. Blessings to you and best of luck in the contest, Linda
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009
Comment from fictionwriter
I love the poem. There are so many ways that I want to shine, in my writing I'm breaking free, in my music and the time I spend with the darling little ones. I love the poem, oh I said that but it's true. Great job.
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I love the poem. There are so many ways that I want to shine, in my writing I'm breaking free, in my music and the time I spend with the darling little ones. I love the poem, oh I said that but it's true. Great job.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009
Comment from malachi1206
I thought this was a lovely form used and the content overall excellent it had a really good flow and it was a pleasure to read and review this a.m. malachi1206
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I thought this was a lovely form used and the content overall excellent it had a really good flow and it was a pleasure to read and review this a.m. malachi1206
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009
Comment from sara-beth
Another great one, girl! The thoughts exressed are worth considering deeply....we do choose our own destiny....and that painting is truly wonderful! I always enjoy your offerings.
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Another great one, girl! The thoughts exressed are worth considering deeply....we do choose our own destiny....and that painting is truly wonderful! I always enjoy your offerings.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009
Comment from schlosslaw_2000
An excellent piece. I admire anyone who can write under such strictures, sixtieeskid. But as for for me, I would be free. Unfettered by such things as these, I float on the wind, pushed this way or that, to find ...to find .... Okay, okay. Do over, do over.:) Larry
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An excellent piece. I admire anyone who can write under such strictures, sixtieeskid. But as for for me, I would be free. Unfettered by such things as these, I float on the wind, pushed this way or that, to find ...to find .... Okay, okay. Do over, do over.:) Larry
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009
Comment from L Stout
Unique! We are born with free will
A gift to be cherished each day
What a lovely poem! It is bright and positive as well as having a wonderful flow! This was a lovely and lyrical read! xx Lisa
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Unique! We are born with free will
A gift to be cherished each day
What a lovely poem! It is bright and positive as well as having a wonderful flow! This was a lovely and lyrical read! xx Lisa
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009
Comment from MaureenC
I am not a poet and don't know a lot about it but the more I am on FS I am learning a lot. I do know what I like to read though. And this work is really a sweet read flowing off the tongue beautifully.
Well done
Mauseyc
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I am not a poet and don't know a lot about it but the more I am on FS I am learning a lot. I do know what I like to read though. And this work is really a sweet read flowing off the tongue beautifully.
Well done
Mauseyc
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009