CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Quilt of Nature"A collection of poetry
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Comment from jmyron
Very good. The format is good, the right syllable count, a good storyline, and a good satori. all in all, a good Haiku. Write on.
John
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Very good. The format is good, the right syllable count, a good storyline, and a good satori. all in all, a good Haiku. Write on.
John
Comment Written 31-Mar-2009
Comment from Joan E.
Wow, you were prolific while I was in Kentucky. You created a delightful set of colorful images in your haiku. I think your satori was very successful and the picture you chose complimented this 5-7-5 beautifully.
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Wow, you were prolific while I was in Kentucky. You created a delightful set of colorful images in your haiku. I think your satori was very successful and the picture you chose complimented this 5-7-5 beautifully.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2009
Comment from Rain Chapman
The words and the picture compliment each other so perfectly, but even without the picture the words paint a beautiful image of fall foliage in its glory. You have a knack for vivid imagery. Great entry and best of luck!
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The words and the picture compliment each other so perfectly, but even without the picture the words paint a beautiful image of fall foliage in its glory. You have a knack for vivid imagery. Great entry and best of luck!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
Comment from Dklrdmcches
this was fantatsic. great images wre felt throughout your well written words. the color sparks the imagination and the taste of fall is in the air!...DKLRD
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this was fantatsic. great images wre felt throughout your well written words. the color sparks the imagination and the taste of fall is in the air!...DKLRD
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
Comment from Judian James
Wow Sue. I like this one very much. It's visually stunning without the photo and it's so true. To ride through the mountains during fall, is like looking at a patchwork quilt of color. well done
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Wow Sue. I like this one very much. It's visually stunning without the photo and it's so true. To ride through the mountains during fall, is like looking at a patchwork quilt of color. well done
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi sixteezkid. This is another excellent piece of vividly descriptive poetry describing summer turning into autumn. Gorgeous imagery. Good luck
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Hi sixteezkid. This is another excellent piece of vividly descriptive poetry describing summer turning into autumn. Gorgeous imagery. Good luck
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
Comment from Perp Ihebom
Beautiful descriptive poem. I think it is an excellent haiku piece as it meets all the requirements of a haiku. I love the progression depicted by the various colours of leaves at different seasons. kudos
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Beautiful descriptive poem. I think it is an excellent haiku piece as it meets all the requirements of a haiku. I love the progression depicted by the various colours of leaves at different seasons. kudos
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
Comment from dportwood
Very nicely done 5-7-5 haiku paying tribute to autumn. Complimented well with the artwork. Good luck in the contest.
Duane
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Very nicely done 5-7-5 haiku paying tribute to autumn. Complimented well with the artwork. Good luck in the contest.
Duane
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
Comment from Lady & Louis
The quilt is a perfect image to use for an autumn poem, Sixteezkid - those chill nights make the thought of a warm, colourful quilt most attractive! (It's autumn here and while the days are warm, the nights have become decidedly brisk.) The satori works well, giving a shift of meaning to the autumn colours, and leading to the thought of earth's sleep of winter. Mm, this is making me want to curl up under the blankets, lol.
Good work and good luck in the contest!
Cheers,
LL
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The quilt is a perfect image to use for an autumn poem, Sixteezkid - those chill nights make the thought of a warm, colourful quilt most attractive! (It's autumn here and while the days are warm, the nights have become decidedly brisk.) The satori works well, giving a shift of meaning to the autumn colours, and leading to the thought of earth's sleep of winter. Mm, this is making me want to curl up under the blankets, lol.
Good work and good luck in the contest!
Cheers,
LL
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
Comment from Jnetgame
Very nice haiku about autumn. I especially like your last line: autumns patchwork quilt (creative). I didn't see anything to change.
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Very nice haiku about autumn. I especially like your last line: autumns patchwork quilt (creative). I didn't see anything to change.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009