CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Liar"A collection of poetry
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Comment from FredCollingwood
The rating Nazi won't let me give you any more sixes intil a month goes by. This one deserves one though. Well done.
----Fred----
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The rating Nazi won't let me give you any more sixes intil a month goes by. This one deserves one though. Well done.
----Fred----
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
Comment from Mrs. KT
Oh! Goodness! Exquisite! Strong, emotive imagery. Rich in cadence. Begs to be read aloud. An extremely well-written vilanelle, and one that I shall remember for very long time - for its form and more importantly, it message.
Take Care...diane
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Oh! Goodness! Exquisite! Strong, emotive imagery. Rich in cadence. Begs to be read aloud. An extremely well-written vilanelle, and one that I shall remember for very long time - for its form and more importantly, it message.
Take Care...diane
Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
Comment from Minglement
Well, I love everything about this one - the choice of poetic style, the subject (well handled), the colors and artwork. All beautifully balanced with a great message. Terrific job.
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Well, I love everything about this one - the choice of poetic style, the subject (well handled), the colors and artwork. All beautifully balanced with a great message. Terrific job.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
Comment from MJMuraco
This is a very interesting and educational poem. I am learned a lot about the different types of poetry from your author notes. This villanelle is very well done especially considering the restrictions.
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This is a very interesting and educational poem. I am learned a lot about the different types of poetry from your author notes. This villanelle is very well done especially considering the restrictions.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ...
This is very well-written in full conformity with the requirements for the Villanelle format. You have cleverly woven different attributes of a liar into your
lines.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
There is nothing to suggest changing.
With love from ...... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Sixteezkid ...
This is very well-written in full conformity with the requirements for the Villanelle format. You have cleverly woven different attributes of a liar into your
lines.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
There is nothing to suggest changing.
With love from ...... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
Comment from Freeflyer
I have never heard of Villanelle style poetry. You seem to have done rather well here though as the topic is a good one and the poem flows well.
I believe that regret is a lie only if it does not give us cause to learn from our mistakes and we do the same thing all over again. Keep up the great work.
Freeflyer
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I have never heard of Villanelle style poetry. You seem to have done rather well here though as the topic is a good one and the poem flows well.
I believe that regret is a lie only if it does not give us cause to learn from our mistakes and we do the same thing all over again. Keep up the great work.
Freeflyer
Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
Comment from sing4some
Hello Kid.. I am new here , about 2 weeks. Man, what a superb job of staying on theme in the "villanelle" poetic form". I learn something new everyday I look around. I can see why you are ranked number 2. Good stuff. Be looking for more.
Be blessed
Lloyd
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Hello Kid.. I am new here , about 2 weeks. Man, what a superb job of staying on theme in the "villanelle" poetic form". I learn something new everyday I look around. I can see why you are ranked number 2. Good stuff. Be looking for more.
Be blessed
Lloyd
Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
Comment from Jomo17
You did a great job on this villanelle poem. You executed all of the requirements perfectly. I like what the poem has to say. This poem makes the reader reflect on the meaning. I appreciate poems that make us think.
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You did a great job on this villanelle poem. You executed all of the requirements perfectly. I like what the poem has to say. This poem makes the reader reflect on the meaning. I appreciate poems that make us think.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
You are very talented your create so strong poems in many forms during our lives we do have regrets due to many reasons well done regards Fuller
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You are very talented your create so strong poems in many forms during our lives we do have regrets due to many reasons well done regards Fuller
Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
Comment from just2draw
Oh, the villanelle style of poem is a challenge! No wonder I haven't seen it before. I'm not sure the alternating repeating rhymes works for me, but the message was clear.
Well done on taking on such a challenging format. You've done well!
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Oh, the villanelle style of poem is a challenge! No wonder I haven't seen it before. I'm not sure the alternating repeating rhymes works for me, but the message was clear.
Well done on taking on such a challenging format. You've done well!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2009