CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from fictionwriter
What a great little poem. Truth is always what it is, and all things are judged by it no matter what. It is truly a sifting process. Great job.
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What a great little poem. Truth is always what it is, and all things are judged by it no matter what. It is truly a sifting process. Great job.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2009
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
The last line didn't give me full poetic closure. I'm not sure I "got" it, if you will, and that's pretty important in a piece as small as this one it. It needs to punch ya' in the head with its premise and knock you down with its structure.
A good piece, but I don't think a little extra work on it would hurt.
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The last line didn't give me full poetic closure. I'm not sure I "got" it, if you will, and that's pretty important in a piece as small as this one it. It needs to punch ya' in the head with its premise and knock you down with its structure.
A good piece, but I don't think a little extra work on it would hurt.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2009
Comment from joan marie
When it comes down to the bottom line this is so true. Well said. I wish you lots of luck in this contest. You are great at writing these. joan marie
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When it comes down to the bottom line this is so true. Well said. I wish you lots of luck in this contest. You are great at writing these. joan marie
Comment Written 22-Mar-2009
Comment from jaeladarling
A lot of truth in this well-written poem. It's so nice to have people you just know you can trust. It is a special, unspoken bond. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
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A lot of truth in this well-written poem. It's so nice to have people you just know you can trust. It is a special, unspoken bond. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2009
Comment from Jomo17
This is wonderful poem about trust. You followed the format perfectly and created a very effective picture of how you see "trust." The poem is very enjoyable to read. This is a strong contest entry. Good luck in the contest.
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This is wonderful poem about trust. You followed the format perfectly and created a very effective picture of how you see "trust." The poem is very enjoyable to read. This is a strong contest entry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2009
Comment from Nightwind1
This was a lovely poem. You spoke a clear message on trust that we all could learn from. I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
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This was a lovely poem. You spoke a clear message on trust that we all could learn from. I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2009
Comment from NightWriter
"Trust" is a perfectly written and well stated tetractys poem on faith in others. Poem has a perfect rhythm from first to last word. Well done.
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"Trust" is a perfectly written and well stated tetractys poem on faith in others. Poem has a perfect rhythm from first to last word. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from Amfunny
Nicely written poem. It appears to meet all the requirements for a tetractys poem with the correct syllable count. Good job.
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Nicely written poem. It appears to meet all the requirements for a tetractys poem with the correct syllable count. Good job.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from skye
Trust is everything.
Your poem gets to the core of it.
Chaff is sifted, the wheat is removed from the tares, the kernals rise to the top, and we find the trustworthy because of their deeds.
Well done.
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Trust is everything.
Your poem gets to the core of it.
Chaff is sifted, the wheat is removed from the tares, the kernals rise to the top, and we find the trustworthy because of their deeds.
Well done.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from MJMuraco
You did a great job with this simple Tetracytys poem. It has imagery and says a lot in such a restricted form of poetry. The artwork is very fitting for the poem.
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You did a great job with this simple Tetracytys poem. It has imagery and says a lot in such a restricted form of poetry. The artwork is very fitting for the poem.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009