CSP: A Collection of Poems
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28 total reviews
Comment from katha8
"It hurt like hell," should it be "It hurts like hell"? Yes, sins we committed yesterday will keep haunting us today and tomorrow if we are not totally reconciled with God yet. Thank you for sharing.
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"It hurt like hell," should it be "It hurts like hell"? Yes, sins we committed yesterday will keep haunting us today and tomorrow if we are not totally reconciled with God yet. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
Comment from c_lucas
A very well written poem that denies the truth. This is well written with a smooth flow of words making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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A very well written poem that denies the truth. This is well written with a smooth flow of words making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
I enjoyed reading your short poem of love. I found no errors while reading. It was my pleasure. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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I enjoyed reading your short poem of love. I found no errors while reading. It was my pleasure. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from glacierbabe
You did a wonderful job painting a picture with such few words. Love the masks artwork. I found no errors needing correction. Best of luck in the contest. Cheryl :)
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You did a wonderful job painting a picture with such few words. Love the masks artwork. I found no errors needing correction. Best of luck in the contest. Cheryl :)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from moosegal
Very beautiful contrast between so many opposites...then and now, not hurting but really you are, the picture with the easily recognized drama masks. Not easy to do in 15 words but you did it. Great job!
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Very beautiful contrast between so many opposites...then and now, not hurting but really you are, the picture with the easily recognized drama masks. Not easy to do in 15 words but you did it. Great job!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from DeboraDyess
Wow. Powerful and moving and TRUE! We say our hearts have mended, but so often it's not. Bandaged, but not healed. Well done; no corrections or suggestions. Blessings, Deb
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Wow. Powerful and moving and TRUE! We say our hearts have mended, but so often it's not. Bandaged, but not healed. Well done; no corrections or suggestions. Blessings, Deb
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from PUPA
This is so true, we do keep saying "yes, sure, I am fine, got over it", but do we ever? Very well expressed, very effective.
Good luck.
Love
Pupa
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This is so true, we do keep saying "yes, sure, I am fine, got over it", but do we ever? Very well expressed, very effective.
Good luck.
Love
Pupa
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from pitmanette
yeah, yeah, i get what you're saying, and been there. haven't we all? and if not, better batten down the hatches, 'cause sure as God made little green apples it'll come. great word painting. good luck.
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yeah, yeah, i get what you're saying, and been there. haven't we all? and if not, better batten down the hatches, 'cause sure as God made little green apples it'll come. great word painting. good luck.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from Roisin
Well Sue, you've given exactly what they asked for - powerful. This is really lovely and definitely shows the power of love. A great entry for the contest. Good luck.
Hugs
Roisin x
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Well Sue, you've given exactly what they asked for - powerful. This is really lovely and definitely shows the power of love. A great entry for the contest. Good luck.
Hugs
Roisin x
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from Diane Marie
This is a terrific short poem. I always think it is so much harder to write a good short poem because the words are so few that they need to be more precise and meaningful and I found yours were. Good Luck!
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This is a terrific short poem. I always think it is so much harder to write a good short poem because the words are so few that they need to be more precise and meaningful and I found yours were. Good Luck!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009