CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from tammipratt
A very beautiful tribute. I think this is a lovely read. Thanks for sharing. Great structure and form. Really pretty and lovely.
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A very beautiful tribute. I think this is a lovely read. Thanks for sharing. Great structure and form. Really pretty and lovely.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from glacierbabe
Sue this is a beautiful tribute to your dad. It shows how much you loved him. The description is wonderful and emotional. I found no errors for correction. Best of luck with the contest. :)
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Sue this is a beautiful tribute to your dad. It shows how much you loved him. The description is wonderful and emotional. I found no errors for correction. Best of luck with the contest. :)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from jack silver
i am sorry about you losing your dad. i have lost loved as well. so many times i feel lost without them with me. but you know what i am not alone and never will you be alone either... friends for life.
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i am sorry about you losing your dad. i have lost loved as well. so many times i feel lost without them with me. but you know what i am not alone and never will you be alone either... friends for life.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from malachi1206
A truly noble and worthy tribute to your father and I am sorry for your loss I understand though September will be three years since my father passed great write malachi1206
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A truly noble and worthy tribute to your father and I am sorry for your loss I understand though September will be three years since my father passed great write malachi1206
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from Freeflyer
It is sad to lose a parent and can take a long time to get over the loss if ever we do. You wrote a lovely poem in memory of your Dad and I am sure he is smiling at you as he hears your message. Great work.
Freeflyer
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It is sad to lose a parent and can take a long time to get over the loss if ever we do. You wrote a lovely poem in memory of your Dad and I am sure he is smiling at you as he hears your message. Great work.
Freeflyer
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from raimie
A most touching piece from a daughter to her father. i am particularly touched by this as Jan 24th marked my fathers one year anniversary date.
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A most touching piece from a daughter to her father. i am particularly touched by this as Jan 24th marked my fathers one year anniversary date.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from MaureenC
You have captured the essence of a loved one's first anniversary passing. I think you have done it really well.
I cannot find anything to say against it. Everything is very good.
Mauseyc
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You have captured the essence of a loved one's first anniversary passing. I think you have done it really well.
I cannot find anything to say against it. Everything is very good.
Mauseyc
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from palsuresh
A nice poetic tribute to your father. I like the last two lines very much-
"While picking weeds, I'll groom the site
And clean his stone to keep it bright."
These lines speak a lot about your deep sentiments.
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A nice poetic tribute to your father. I like the last two lines very much-
"While picking weeds, I'll groom the site
And clean his stone to keep it bright."
These lines speak a lot about your deep sentiments.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards
Sixties-kid, this is a beautiful tribute to a lucky dad that had such a caring daughter. He waits in heaven for you and the scriptures say we have viewers from up above.
Dave
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Sixties-kid, this is a beautiful tribute to a lucky dad that had such a caring daughter. He waits in heaven for you and the scriptures say we have viewers from up above.
Dave
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
Comment from jaeladarling
Awww, how sad! I visit my grandpa's grave several times a year and keep veteran-specific items on it to remind viewers of his status as a soldier in both World War II and the Korean War. For yours, you may consider a string of clovers around the base of the flowers since it is so close to St. Pat's day. Just a thought. :)
Anyway, great poem - a pleasure to read. My thoughts and prayers are with you this week.
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Awww, how sad! I visit my grandpa's grave several times a year and keep veteran-specific items on it to remind viewers of his status as a soldier in both World War II and the Korean War. For yours, you may consider a string of clovers around the base of the flowers since it is so close to St. Pat's day. Just a thought. :)
Anyway, great poem - a pleasure to read. My thoughts and prayers are with you this week.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009