CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from amada
I like your clever definition of FATE, ""Life's proof that nothing is assured." You selected a very good presentation as well.
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I like your clever definition of FATE, ""Life's proof that nothing is assured." You selected a very good presentation as well.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
Comment from glacierbabe
You did a wonderful job with this one. I like the subject and it fits the parameters. I found no errors that need correction. Best of luck in the contest. Cheryl :)
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You did a wonderful job with this one. I like the subject and it fits the parameters. I found no errors that need correction. Best of luck in the contest. Cheryl :)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Freeflyer
Wow! You have yet another competition on the go with another great entry. I have never come across this form of verse before but figure you have nailed it. Good luck.
Freeflyer
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Wow! You have yet another competition on the go with another great entry. I have never come across this form of verse before but figure you have nailed it. Good luck.
Freeflyer
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Brandenpaul
Avery clear and precise description of what fate is. I like this form of poetry although not very familiar with it. I give you kudos for your courage to try and conquer so many different kinds of writings.
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Avery clear and precise description of what fate is. I like this form of poetry although not very familiar with it. I give you kudos for your courage to try and conquer so many different kinds of writings.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Paradox Tremors
It made me think and realize how true your words are my friend. Love the crazy art you picked out for this. Together, they both put a smile on my face -- and that's a accomplishment as I got a very bad migraine today. Have a good day my friend.
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It made me think and realize how true your words are my friend. Love the crazy art you picked out for this. Together, they both put a smile on my face -- and that's a accomplishment as I got a very bad migraine today. Have a good day my friend.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a nice poem. I like the theme you chose for your clarity pyramid. Fate, destiny and such other concepts are constant reminders that we are not in charge here. kudos
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This is a nice poem. I like the theme you chose for your clarity pyramid. Fate, destiny and such other concepts are constant reminders that we are not in charge here. kudos
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from MaureenC
The essence of fate has been captured here. Isn't it true? That nothing in life is sure, this short piece shows that.
Well done
Mauseyc
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The essence of fate has been captured here. Isn't it true? That nothing in life is sure, this short piece shows that.
Well done
Mauseyc
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Mike K2
Boy do some people like to make life that way. I enjoyed this well written poem and that is correct. Nothing is assured, but through faith, we have a chance.
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Boy do some people like to make life that way. I enjoyed this well written poem and that is correct. Nothing is assured, but through faith, we have a chance.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from sugarbear
Hi Sixteezkid,
I like your use of "Fate" in this clarity pyramid. You have captured it very well! Your poem fits the format exactly and I did not notice any spags. The artwork is interesting and adds a new dimension to the poem. Great job! sugarbear
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Hi Sixteezkid,
I like your use of "Fate" in this clarity pyramid. You have captured it very well! Your poem fits the format exactly and I did not notice any spags. The artwork is interesting and adds a new dimension to the poem. Great job! sugarbear
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from Hitcher
OK! We know you are good with these ones, very impressive selection of words to help enhance the clarity of your Pyramid Sue, not as good as Pierced[That one blew me away]but still very impressive, good luck friend.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009
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OK! We know you are good with these ones, very impressive selection of words to help enhance the clarity of your Pyramid Sue, not as good as Pierced[That one blew me away]but still very impressive, good luck friend.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009
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Well, that image of a rose sure got the creative juices going, so "Pierced" was the better of these two, for sure. But glad you liked this one. Thanks much, Hitch! Suc :-))