CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Mike K2
Well, sometimes daydreams are the best spot. I enjoyed the trip as well from this well written poem. We all need to find such moments.
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Well, sometimes daydreams are the best spot. I enjoyed the trip as well from this well written poem. We all need to find such moments.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from Poetic Friend
Gosh, Sue I can relate wholeheartedly to your well-written poem. Your poem makes these vacation spots inviting. I need that vacation, too. Everyone needs relaxation.
By the way, where do you get your amazing artwork? Are you the artist?
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Gosh, Sue I can relate wholeheartedly to your well-written poem. Your poem makes these vacation spots inviting. I need that vacation, too. Everyone needs relaxation.
By the way, where do you get your amazing artwork? Are you the artist?
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from KelinaJ
Interesting image selection. Good presentation and color scheme. Good use of rhythm and rhyme. The lines flow well. A great little journey across the world. Very nice.
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Interesting image selection. Good presentation and color scheme. Good use of rhythm and rhyme. The lines flow well. A great little journey across the world. Very nice.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Sue....the most inexpensive trips we can ever take are those we take with our own imagination! I like the way you wrote this poem....it is whimsical and full of fun. Next time you take such a journey will you take me along? Well done.....blessings....chey
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Hi Sue....the most inexpensive trips we can ever take are those we take with our own imagination! I like the way you wrote this poem....it is whimsical and full of fun. Next time you take such a journey will you take me along? Well done.....blessings....chey
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from Brandenpaul
And fun it was. How necessary it is to daydream sometimes to get away from the every day. I thought this was a clever write and allowed us to escape for a bit. Nice job.
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And fun it was. How necessary it is to daydream sometimes to get away from the every day. I thought this was a clever write and allowed us to escape for a bit. Nice job.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from Freeflyer
This was a good fun read. I am glad Down Under got a mention in your imaginations, next time you come check out our winter snow fields in the south, our tropical forests in the north, our central deserts and our secluded beaches in the west. This is an excellent poem. I could not fault it and enjoyed the read.
Freeflyer
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This was a good fun read. I am glad Down Under got a mention in your imaginations, next time you come check out our winter snow fields in the south, our tropical forests in the north, our central deserts and our secluded beaches in the west. This is an excellent poem. I could not fault it and enjoyed the read.
Freeflyer
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ...
This really was a light-hearted and enjoyable poem,
well-written with good, descriptive words providing vivid imagery for your readers.
There is just one suggestion to make and that concerns your frequent use of the word 'heading'. With a bit of thought, I believe you can avoid this repetition.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Sixteezkid ...
This really was a light-hearted and enjoyable poem,
well-written with good, descriptive words providing vivid imagery for your readers.
There is just one suggestion to make and that concerns your frequent use of the word 'heading'. With a bit of thought, I believe you can avoid this repetition.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from S.Yocom
This poem was fun to read, Sue. It sounds as if you also had fun writing it. I enjoyed the meter, which trots along nicely, as well as your good rhymes. Very nice.
Sally
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This poem was fun to read, Sue. It sounds as if you also had fun writing it. I enjoyed the meter, which trots along nicely, as well as your good rhymes. Very nice.
Sally
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Good work, Suz, I loved it! You are right, this was fun and it is well-written with spot on rhyme and meter. Write on!
Pen
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Good work, Suz, I loved it! You are right, this was fun and it is well-written with spot on rhyme and meter. Write on!
Pen
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009
Comment from Alexander E Poet
I thought this was great a great piece of reality. very well written piece, not hard to follow. a very good write and a wonderful take on life.There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one Alexander QQ...
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I thought this was great a great piece of reality. very well written piece, not hard to follow. a very good write and a wonderful take on life.There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one Alexander QQ...
Comment Written 15-Mar-2009