CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Manna from Uncle Sam"A collection of poetry
55 total reviews
Comment from jmyron
God, I couldn't agree with you more. I'm giving you a sixer for the political insight alone. Welcome to the conservative branch of fanstory. Maybe we ought to start a 'Conservative Club' within fanstory. We are not the only ones here.
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God, I couldn't agree with you more. I'm giving you a sixer for the political insight alone. Welcome to the conservative branch of fanstory. Maybe we ought to start a 'Conservative Club' within fanstory. We are not the only ones here.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
Comment from Minglement
You've penned a terrifically honest piece and I appreciate your opinions expressed here. Your poem is beautifully crafted, as always, with perfect art! Great job.
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You've penned a terrifically honest piece and I appreciate your opinions expressed here. Your poem is beautifully crafted, as always, with perfect art! Great job.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from Atheen
Oh I loved that one. I thought it was smart, insightful and very witty. The rhythm is sustained through and through, the cynicism present between the lines, and the flow smooth and efficient.
A really good poem. I enjoyed it a lot.
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Oh I loved that one. I thought it was smart, insightful and very witty. The rhythm is sustained through and through, the cynicism present between the lines, and the flow smooth and efficient.
A really good poem. I enjoyed it a lot.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
Comment from Freeflyer
A well written poem full of truths and anxiety at who is in charge as well as where we are headed. I enjoyed the read. Good luck with future writes.
Freeflyer
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A well written poem full of truths and anxiety at who is in charge as well as where we are headed. I enjoyed the read. Good luck with future writes.
Freeflyer
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
Comment from Fat man Says
Your artwork is perfect for your very intelligent well
written poem...Truly enjoyed the read but was a little
jealous knowing how smart you ladies are these days
...Bob
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Your artwork is perfect for your very intelligent well
written poem...Truly enjoyed the read but was a little
jealous knowing how smart you ladies are these days
...Bob
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
Comment from fastdigits
Indeed, a commentary and a thought
provoking poem on a change in direction
by people who are not necessarily the
brightest, but certainly the most powerful,
sometimes, and most of the times by their
own wealth, which allowed them in the first
place to even run for that lofty office.
But enouth of my tirade. It is your writing
that I am supposed to critique, and it is
presented in an interesting and free flowing
manner that holds the reader's attention
throughout and does provoke thoughts of
sadness as to the direction that the world
is heading.
A well crafted writing that is artistically
present.
Well done
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Indeed, a commentary and a thought
provoking poem on a change in direction
by people who are not necessarily the
brightest, but certainly the most powerful,
sometimes, and most of the times by their
own wealth, which allowed them in the first
place to even run for that lofty office.
But enouth of my tirade. It is your writing
that I am supposed to critique, and it is
presented in an interesting and free flowing
manner that holds the reader's attention
throughout and does provoke thoughts of
sadness as to the direction that the world
is heading.
A well crafted writing that is artistically
present.
Well done
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
Comment from Parissa
This is a good political poem. Where does the all that money go? Great use of sarcasim. I like the word choice and you can feel your frustration through the poem. Well written Thanks for sharing.
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This is a good political poem. Where does the all that money go? Great use of sarcasim. I like the word choice and you can feel your frustration through the poem. Well written Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
Comment from glacierbabe
Well as it happens I agree with you, Sue. I would not penalize you even if I didn't. I won't get on my soapbox 'cause there is not enough room in this review box for all I would have to say LOL So...on we go. I loved the message. The rythm and rhyme are perfect and I found no other types of errors that need correctionl. A very clear, concise and well written piece. Cheryl :0
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Well as it happens I agree with you, Sue. I would not penalize you even if I didn't. I won't get on my soapbox 'cause there is not enough room in this review box for all I would have to say LOL So...on we go. I loved the message. The rythm and rhyme are perfect and I found no other types of errors that need correctionl. A very clear, concise and well written piece. Cheryl :0
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
good presentation; I say give the people the $ we'll bail ourselves out better than all this money we're throwing to the fat cats; well done, lots of little piggies makin out like fat cats :-) well said!
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good presentation; I say give the people the $ we'll bail ourselves out better than all this money we're throwing to the fat cats; well done, lots of little piggies makin out like fat cats :-) well said!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
Comment from Tedisking
Cant agree with you more, were aready in a national debt why do they need to increase it by paying everyone money. All it will cause is inflation. The constitution was for the most part a good idea but democracy is a bad one. Democracy is to pick a ton of people who do everything to get reelected not caring about the nation but instead just their reelection and then give them the power to change our lives with the flick of the wrist and the push of a pen. (BTW almost forgot, I saw no grammar or spelling mistakes so Good Job)
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Cant agree with you more, were aready in a national debt why do they need to increase it by paying everyone money. All it will cause is inflation. The constitution was for the most part a good idea but democracy is a bad one. Democracy is to pick a ton of people who do everything to get reelected not caring about the nation but instead just their reelection and then give them the power to change our lives with the flick of the wrist and the push of a pen. (BTW almost forgot, I saw no grammar or spelling mistakes so Good Job)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2009