CSP: A Collection of Poems
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44 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
As always, a great job of conveying a message and telling a story within your lyrical poem. Great balance of everyting. Enjoyable read.
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As always, a great job of conveying a message and telling a story within your lyrical poem. Great balance of everyting. Enjoyable read.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from mushroom
we've all known cruel people, you depict cruel with such strong descriptive writing and this has a lot of feling within the content
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we've all known cruel people, you depict cruel with such strong descriptive writing and this has a lot of feling within the content
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from bard owl
THis is excellent. I think rictameters are fun and a stretching of the poetic mind. It is one of the characteristics of a cruel person to use or bully another and your rictameter uses this theme very effectively. The picture is a great accent for your words. Blessings, Linda
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THis is excellent. I think rictameters are fun and a stretching of the poetic mind. It is one of the characteristics of a cruel person to use or bully another and your rictameter uses this theme very effectively. The picture is a great accent for your words. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from miamia
Excellent! I like this sentiment and your choice of words:
Neverminding the aftermath
Or damaged swath of pain
Original and shows much imagination. I have no nits to pick here, just an enjoyable all-around read. Your Picasso sets it off just right, too, just what pain could look like if one could actually see its physical presence. Well done, poet! -mia
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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Excellent! I like this sentiment and your choice of words:
Neverminding the aftermath
Or damaged swath of pain
Original and shows much imagination. I have no nits to pick here, just an enjoyable all-around read. Your Picasso sets it off just right, too, just what pain could look like if one could actually see its physical presence. Well done, poet! -mia
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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miamia, thank you so much for your very kind compliments. And for highlighting the lines you liked. Yes, isn't that a great Picasso?! Your great review is very much appreciated, Sue
Comment from fictionwriter
What a great description of some people that I know. They don't think about what they say or do or how it impacts those around them. Great job.
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What a great description of some people that I know. They don't think about what they say or do or how it impacts those around them. Great job.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from tammipratt
Just superb! I loved the image, and they way that the structure sat on the page - the physical structure of the poem was great, and the swinging rythm of the poem that developed as a result of using the "ings". Well for me anyway. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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Just superb! I loved the image, and they way that the structure sat on the page - the physical structure of the poem was great, and the swinging rythm of the poem that developed as a result of using the "ings". Well for me anyway. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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So glad you liked the 'ings'. I'm very particular about repetition like this, but thought it worked on this subject matter. Thank you for your very kind review, Sue
Comment from womanwriter
Totally enjoyable -easy to read and easy to understand the truths within.
Thanks for sharing - now could you please be kind enough to tell me what a 'rictameter' is? LOL
Sorry for my ignorance - but glad I can go to a 'Master' for help.
Sincerely
womanwriter
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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Totally enjoyable -easy to read and easy to understand the truths within.
Thanks for sharing - now could you please be kind enough to tell me what a 'rictameter' is? LOL
Sorry for my ignorance - but glad I can go to a 'Master' for help.
Sincerely
womanwriter
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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Uh-oh! I ALWAYS put the description of a poem in author's notes and missed this one. Must do that now. It's a lengthy description. If you want to know what it is, please go back to the author's notes. Thanks for bring that up. And thank you for most generous compliments and review. With regards, Sue
Comment from davidray
I think you've managed to write every word that describes cruelty to a 't'. Enjoyed this as i always do. And thanks for your wit in the author's notes!!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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I think you've managed to write every word that describes cruelty to a 't'. Enjoyed this as i always do. And thanks for your wit in the author's notes!!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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Gotta have a sense of humor or we'd all go nuts! HA! Thanks very much for your very kind review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from glacierbabe
This is very interesting. You have described "cruel" very eloquently and in a few short words. I am sorry you missed your deadline. I am sure this would have been a contender. It is very well written. :) Cheryl
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This is very interesting. You have described "cruel" very eloquently and in a few short words. I am sorry you missed your deadline. I am sure this would have been a contender. It is very well written. :) Cheryl
Comment Written 09-Mar-2009
Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards
Well 60's kid, you are late a lot but then you're worth waiting for. So write on time or procrastinate, but just keep entertaining us.
Dave
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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Well 60's kid, you are late a lot but then you're worth waiting for. So write on time or procrastinate, but just keep entertaining us.
Dave
Comment Written 09-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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As long as you don't taunt me anymore about SoCal! LOL!!! Thanks so much for your great review. Always appreciated, Sue :-))