CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from justmade
Your notes were really interesting Sue thanks for the information. Nice form. I think your poem has a lot of depth in it. A very deep thoughts packed in this short poem.
Much love,
Justmade.
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Your notes were really interesting Sue thanks for the information. Nice form. I think your poem has a lot of depth in it. A very deep thoughts packed in this short poem.
Much love,
Justmade.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2009
Comment from Poetic Friend
Sue, in its brevity, this poem speaks volumes of our innate desires for fulfillment. I love, love the philosophical message and tone in this poem.
Good job, as usual, Sue.
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Sue, in its brevity, this poem speaks volumes of our innate desires for fulfillment. I love, love the philosophical message and tone in this poem.
Good job, as usual, Sue.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2009
Comment from tammipratt
Great read - terrific flow and the message was clear and profound. Of course no SPAG - one good thing with this style of poetry because it is short and concise.
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Great read - terrific flow and the message was clear and profound. Of course no SPAG - one good thing with this style of poetry because it is short and concise.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from debskatz
Hey Sue,
Very nice poem! An interesting type of poetry, deceptively simple. I really like your subject 'cause ain't it the truth? Very nice.
Thank you for sharing it with us & also the education!
smiles,
deb
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Hey Sue,
Very nice poem! An interesting type of poetry, deceptively simple. I really like your subject 'cause ain't it the truth? Very nice.
Thank you for sharing it with us & also the education!
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from jdrhye
Nicely written and so few words with such a packed message. Lovely reading and ponderous thought. I have never heard of this type of poem I would like to know more. I think I will check it out! Thank you for sharing.
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Nicely written and so few words with such a packed message. Lovely reading and ponderous thought. I have never heard of this type of poem I would like to know more. I think I will check it out! Thank you for sharing.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from mermaids
This is so true, we are born with needs as human beings,few words state it all,excellent rhyming that emphasizes our common bond.
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This is so true, we are born with needs as human beings,few words state it all,excellent rhyming that emphasizes our common bond.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from earthlybeing
A a new format for me the Fibonacci. I like it. Love the poem. Well written with great meaning in it. It was easy to read and appreciate the meaning. Thanks, Jeanette
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A a new format for me the Fibonacci. I like it. Love the poem. Well written with great meaning in it. It was easy to read and appreciate the meaning. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from jshep
This is the first time I have seen this form, Sue. I really liked it as it is bold or maybe it was the words of the poet. Very well stated and the final line is great for we seek fulfillment until our last breath. Very strong poem. Great job. Joyce
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This is the first time I have seen this form, Sue. I really liked it as it is bold or maybe it was the words of the poet. Very well stated and the final line is great for we seek fulfillment until our last breath. Very strong poem. Great job. Joyce
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards
Uh-huh...I agree with all your wrote in such a Fibonacci fashion...I think anyway. Enjoyed it as usual, keep entertaining us with you prolific writing.
Dave
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Uh-huh...I agree with all your wrote in such a Fibonacci fashion...I think anyway. Enjoyed it as usual, keep entertaining us with you prolific writing.
Dave
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from Dklrdmcches
Interesting piece was found within your well chosen words. great imagery was found throughout the simplistic verse that sprung from the depths of my perception. great job...DKLRD
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Interesting piece was found within your well chosen words. great imagery was found throughout the simplistic verse that sprung from the depths of my perception. great job...DKLRD
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009