CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Our Cosmic Home"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Minglement
Very nice minute poem for the contest. I love the artwork and color mood and the subject your chose is a favorite of mine. Well done. Good luck.
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Very nice minute poem for the contest. I love the artwork and color mood and the subject your chose is a favorite of mine. Well done. Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a great poem. You put your thoughts down so beautifully that it is a delight to read. I enjoyed everything about this poem. kudos
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This is a great poem. You put your thoughts down so beautifully that it is a delight to read. I enjoyed everything about this poem. kudos
Comment Written 13-Feb-2009
Comment from Falafa
What a lovely, smoothly flowing minute poem. And very well thought through. Great picture match for this one. Good luck in the contest.
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What a lovely, smoothly flowing minute poem. And very well thought through. Great picture match for this one. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2009
Comment from Firefly54
Struth, woman - no wonder you're at the number 3 spot! ANother poem to make us think, and I hope it does well for you - good luck
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Struth, woman - no wonder you're at the number 3 spot! ANother poem to make us think, and I hope it does well for you - good luck
Comment Written 13-Feb-2009
Comment from bard owl
The wonders of our galaxy have eternally been a mystery we humans contemplate with wonder. Your contest entry is excellent and touches on a part of the human existence that is rarely put into poetic word. Excellent contest entry. Very original. Best of luck to you with this original work. Blessings, Linda
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The wonders of our galaxy have eternally been a mystery we humans contemplate with wonder. Your contest entry is excellent and touches on a part of the human existence that is rarely put into poetic word. Excellent contest entry. Very original. Best of luck to you with this original work. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 13-Feb-2009
Comment from WordPainter
Sixteezkid, it is awesome to think of all that lies beyond what we can see. You gently led the poem from the breathtaking beauty of what we can see, to the vast mystery of what we cannot fathom. Very well-done. Best wishes in the contest.
Lois
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2009
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Sixteezkid, it is awesome to think of all that lies beyond what we can see. You gently led the poem from the breathtaking beauty of what we can see, to the vast mystery of what we cannot fathom. Very well-done. Best wishes in the contest.
Lois
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2009
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WordPainter, thanks for pointing out my intent to go from "our view" to the unknown. It's the "what we cannot fathom" that makes us think of all the possibilities! Thanks so much for your great review. Sue
Comment from mslyla216
This is a lovely minute poem, Sixteezkid, but it is also informative and straightforward and easy to understand."Its swirl of white, breathtaking sight" is a lovely visual for the reader. Good poem. mslyla
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This is a lovely minute poem, Sixteezkid, but it is also informative and straightforward and easy to understand."Its swirl of white, breathtaking sight" is a lovely visual for the reader. Good poem. mslyla
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
Comment from Cedar
You sure described the vast spaces very well. I especially like this sentence, "Beyond man's eyes, a mystery". If this world stands, man will conquer the unknown.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2009
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You sure described the vast spaces very well. I especially like this sentence, "Beyond man's eyes, a mystery". If this world stands, man will conquer the unknown.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2009
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Yeah, just thinking of what we didn't know even 30 years ago is mind-blowing. A long way to go and to think of all the possible answers out there is more than awesome! Thanks for the great review. Sue
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Morning Sue - You did a great job with this poem. I didn't see anything that needed your attention. The words and the picture fit perfectly together.
have a great day - sherry
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2009
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Morning Sue - You did a great job with this poem. I didn't see anything that needed your attention. The words and the picture fit perfectly together.
have a great day - sherry
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2009
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Sherry, thanks very much for your very kind compliments and review. Very much appreciated, Sue
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Sixteezkid
Glad you picked the Milky Way to write about in your exclaimed entry. Nice swirling and bright image of part of our universe
a pleasure to read and look in the skies a night.
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2009
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Hello Sixteezkid
Glad you picked the Milky Way to write about in your exclaimed entry. Nice swirling and bright image of part of our universe
a pleasure to read and look in the skies a night.
Gert
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2009
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Gert, isn't it a wonderful sight to see the Milky Way and realize the vastness of where we lie in. THanks so much for your very kind review. Sue