CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "In Our Garden"A collection of poetry
14 total reviews
Comment from Jazh
That's beautiful, Sue. I really enjoyed the imagery, and the sense of anticipation. It would be helpful if you could put the contest requirements in your Author Notes. Is this the one where you can't actually use the word 'love'? You've done a great job of saying 'love' without actually spelling it out. Good luck with it. :)
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That's beautiful, Sue. I really enjoyed the imagery, and the sense of anticipation. It would be helpful if you could put the contest requirements in your Author Notes. Is this the one where you can't actually use the word 'love'? You've done a great job of saying 'love' without actually spelling it out. Good luck with it. :)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
Comment from Domino
Short, very sweet, and excellent double meaning romantic message, Sue. A joint effort with each partner contributing in a different way, to eventually reap loving rewards. Nice one, Ray xx
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Short, very sweet, and excellent double meaning romantic message, Sue. A joint effort with each partner contributing in a different way, to eventually reap loving rewards. Nice one, Ray xx
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Yeah, I'm looking for the perfect man who likes to garden. HA! So glad you liked this one, Ray. Thanks for your great compliments and review. Always, Sue
Comment from Hitcher
This is quite clever Sue, you have made good use of your few words and produced a rather heart warming love poem, makes my heart beat to a different rhythm, a smother soothing one, very nice friend, good luck!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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This is quite clever Sue, you have made good use of your few words and produced a rather heart warming love poem, makes my heart beat to a different rhythm, a smother soothing one, very nice friend, good luck!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Now all I have to do is find that perfect man who loves to garden! HA!! Let's see...you're married and love soccer, so that's out! Dang, I'll keep looking. Thanks for the very nice review, Hitch. :-)) Sue
Comment from NightWriter
If "In Our Garden" doesn't win you the contest, there's no justice in the world, LOL. This is beautiful. Very heart warming to read. It touched me. Well done. Bravo! And good luck.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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If "In Our Garden" doesn't win you the contest, there's no justice in the world, LOL. This is beautiful. Very heart warming to read. It touched me. Well done. Bravo! And good luck.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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NightWriter, what an awesome review! Would you represent me in the appellate court? LOL!! So glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for your great review. Is so encouraging! :-)) Sue
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I would LOVE to ... appeal after appeal, LOL.
Comment from Minglement
This paints such a lovely picture of sharing and looking forward to sharing the results. I really enjoyed this delightful poem.
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This paints such a lovely picture of sharing and looking forward to sharing the results. I really enjoyed this delightful poem.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
Comment from joan marie
It was 78 degrees here today and I had two herons and a baby egret with mom or dad can't tell sex. Lovely day to be alive. Great beauty in the color or the art and your words. joan marie
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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It was 78 degrees here today and I had two herons and a baby egret with mom or dad can't tell sex. Lovely day to be alive. Great beauty in the color or the art and your words. joan marie
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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So happy to hear your great mood today, Joan Marie! "A lovely day to be alive" - sounds wonderful. You sure are at your best being around all the critters of the world, aren't you? Thanks so much for your review. Yours, Sue
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If I had it to do again, I would be a Diane Fossey or someone who worked only with animals. Now that it is warming up, I will go back to Humane society and volunteer. I was a Mutt Strutter, dog walker, It is very rewarding and I never thought I could do it without my heartbreaking for all the dogs but they have a safe place and quite a bit of room and lots of people that come and just pet them. The cats who can are running around playing. There is a rocking chair for petting. Of course I want to take them all home. But at least they are warm, feed and safe. I got my two. A Tisket, A Tasket is one of my rescued babies. Couldn't seperate the brothers so took them both. jm
Comment from MJMuraco
Your poem is short, sweet and has a strong message. I love simplicity in poetry and your poem definitely ranked high on my list of short and sweet. The artwork was perfect for the poem.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Your poem is short, sweet and has a strong message. I love simplicity in poetry and your poem definitely ranked high on my list of short and sweet. The artwork was perfect for the poem.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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MJM, thank you for your lovely compliments. So glad you enjoyed this short, sweet poem :-)) And thank you for your very kind review. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from findingmyroom
You have captured the reverence that we need to hold love with in just a few perfect words. I think the absolute best word here is "Anticipating"
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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You have captured the reverence that we need to hold love with in just a few perfect words. I think the absolute best word here is "Anticipating"
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Thanks so much for saying which was your favorite word. One of the joys of a relationship is the anticipation of so much; no matter how small. Thank you for your very kind review and comments. Always, Sue
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Sue it was delightful. I just love the colorful flowers and am amazed at how many varieties we have to enjoy. This is an awesome entry. Loyd
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Sue it was delightful. I just love the colorful flowers and am amazed at how many varieties we have to enjoy. This is an awesome entry. Loyd
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Loyd, thanks so much for your "colorful" remarks! HA! (couldn't help myself)... And thank you for your very kind review. Always, Sue
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Sue it was my pleasure. Loyd
Comment from MsRefusenik
Glad to hear it too. Can't hear it enough. Want to hear it until I believe it. Beautiful picture that accompanies your perfect poem. Keep up the optimism for all of us please. Thanks for sharing this sunny poem.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Glad to hear it too. Can't hear it enough. Want to hear it until I believe it. Beautiful picture that accompanies your perfect poem. Keep up the optimism for all of us please. Thanks for sharing this sunny poem.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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How wonderful it is to plant with your own bare hands and see the fruits of it. That is one of life's many joys. And thank you for sharing your same enthusiasm! And for your lovely review. Always, Sue