CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "A Man's Word"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Brandenpaul
Great Picture. Gone are the days where a handshake was all that was needed. Now it's signature, collateral and much more. I thought your poem packed a nice punch. Enjoyed it very much.
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Great Picture. Gone are the days where a handshake was all that was needed. Now it's signature, collateral and much more. I thought your poem packed a nice punch. Enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
Comment from volunteer angel
Great job on the rictameter. A man's word in the old days was all it took to get a loan. But not so today. Still it's so important to keep one's word. Otherwise no one will honor what you say. Love the poem! Mary Ann
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Great job on the rictameter. A man's word in the old days was all it took to get a loan. But not so today. Still it's so important to keep one's word. Otherwise no one will honor what you say. Love the poem! Mary Ann
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Your poem is well written and your message is well presented and deep in content. Good job on this. It was my pleasure to read.
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Your poem is well written and your message is well presented and deep in content. Good job on this. It was my pleasure to read.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
Comment from whispersofthesoul
Cool piece i love rictameters and i write them when i am bored i love the content and subject and a handashake is golden well done
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Cool piece i love rictameters and i write them when i am bored i love the content and subject and a handashake is golden well done
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
Comment from WRITER1
Very well done, flowed very well. How true these verses are, if you can't take a person at there word where is the integrity.
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Very well done, flowed very well. How true these verses are, if you can't take a person at there word where is the integrity.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
Comment from dportwood
I really like 'A Man's Word' - so accurate in its description in this poem. The words, shape, and syllabics are well done.
Good job.
Duane
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I really like 'A Man's Word' - so accurate in its description in this poem. The words, shape, and syllabics are well done.
Good job.
Duane
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
Comment from XR15
Hi There Sue
Continue to be bamboozled by all these many and varied poetic format. I had a look at a few of these from the recent contest.
This poem really stands out for me in its true mirroring around the central line. Your touch is surely "Golden"
I like the look of this format - I may try one - after another few sonnets LOL
Cheers
Chris
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
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Hi There Sue
Continue to be bamboozled by all these many and varied poetic format. I had a look at a few of these from the recent contest.
This poem really stands out for me in its true mirroring around the central line. Your touch is surely "Golden"
I like the look of this format - I may try one - after another few sonnets LOL
Cheers
Chris
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
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LOL!!! Actually, since you're still "fresh" on the sonnet business, would be good for you to write another fairly soon. Give it a go this weekend. If you need help, I'll be around. I double-dare you. Ha! I just got hooked on this rictameter. On my 3rd. After your sonnet, the ric can be your next homework assignment...LOL!! Thanks for your review, Chris. :-)) Sue
Comment from Word Weaver
Wow! That is really very nice!
I've never heard of this new form but I certainly love it.
The character of this poem is very effective and strong. I like the way you started with "Golden" and finished with the same word. Ahhhh... I hope I'll be writing like you soon...
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Wow! That is really very nice!
I've never heard of this new form but I certainly love it.
The character of this poem is very effective and strong. I like the way you started with "Golden" and finished with the same word. Ahhhh... I hope I'll be writing like you soon...
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'A Man's Word' is a well written and interesting piece of poetry. The style, structure and content of this work are as they should be. It was a pleasure to review a work of this caliber.
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'A Man's Word' is a well written and interesting piece of poetry. The style, structure and content of this work are as they should be. It was a pleasure to review a work of this caliber.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
Comment from Diny
I have read many a ricto on this site and am always astonished by the varied subjects and themes involved one chooses to pen- Love the hands picture- for a working man is a cherished thing these days1- Write on-DINY
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I have read many a ricto on this site and am always astonished by the varied subjects and themes involved one chooses to pen- Love the hands picture- for a working man is a cherished thing these days1- Write on-DINY
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009