CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 77 "Our Flame"A collection of poetry
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Comment from LegendaryAngel
A nice and calming poem, and enjoyable to read. I'm certainly no english major of any sort, but i questioned the rhyming scheme on the first and second vereses. Other than that, it turned out great, loved the words you used and the relationship with other words around it.
LA
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A nice and calming poem, and enjoyable to read. I'm certainly no english major of any sort, but i questioned the rhyming scheme on the first and second vereses. Other than that, it turned out great, loved the words you used and the relationship with other words around it.
LA
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
Comment from kassey
This is a really good modern sonnet. The life of a family described in a very genteel way.
"We lie before the fire; and embers glow
Contentment now, we raised the darlings well".
Time now for each other to renew their love.
It is a lovely theme, simple but very well done. Excellent Kay
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This is a really good modern sonnet. The life of a family described in a very genteel way.
"We lie before the fire; and embers glow
Contentment now, we raised the darlings well".
Time now for each other to renew their love.
It is a lovely theme, simple but very well done. Excellent Kay
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
Comment from chaswriter
Sue - You must be a great romantic at heart. Loved the visual imagery of the romantic scene that you write and I can hear the crackling fire. Nicely done. Charlie
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Sue - You must be a great romantic at heart. Loved the visual imagery of the romantic scene that you write and I can hear the crackling fire. Nicely done. Charlie
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
Comment from mslyla216
This is a very good entry in to this Romantic English Sonnet contest. Your rhyme scheme perfectly embodies the contest requirements and your story was easily readable and understandable. You told a fine story that should speak to the romantic in all of us. mslyla
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This is a very good entry in to this Romantic English Sonnet contest. Your rhyme scheme perfectly embodies the contest requirements and your story was easily readable and understandable. You told a fine story that should speak to the romantic in all of us. mslyla
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
This is a delightful picture you have painted with words. A most haunting poem, which sums up love and married life so very well. I really enjoy your poetry. I am pleased to see that you are ranked at number 4...I hope you reach the very top!
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This is a delightful picture you have painted with words. A most haunting poem, which sums up love and married life so very well. I really enjoy your poetry. I am pleased to see that you are ranked at number 4...I hope you reach the very top!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
Comment from Firefly54
A beautiful sonnet of true and undying love... if only it could always be this way... Very well written... in my eyes, certainly one of the top three here today
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A beautiful sonnet of true and undying love... if only it could always be this way... Very well written... in my eyes, certainly one of the top three here today
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
Comment from justmade
This told a really good story and an emotional one too Sue.
It was really heartfelt like reliving the memorable moments of the past.
Much love,
Justmade.
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This told a really good story and an emotional one too Sue.
It was really heartfelt like reliving the memorable moments of the past.
Much love,
Justmade.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
Comment from TerryRodgers
I'm giving five stars. Excellent poem. The poem flowed well and the rhymes were correct. I enjoyed reading it.
Good luck in your writing.
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I'm giving five stars. Excellent poem. The poem flowed well and the rhymes were correct. I enjoyed reading it.
Good luck in your writing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
Comment from Fleedleflump
...and may the flame continue to blossom, in all its beauty and glory, for as many moons as may come.
This is beautiful stuff; it has a slight air of the wistful, but no whimsy. Just an urgent sense of love.
Mike
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...and may the flame continue to blossom, in all its beauty and glory, for as many moons as may come.
This is beautiful stuff; it has a slight air of the wistful, but no whimsy. Just an urgent sense of love.
Mike
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
Comment from Nanny 6
I remember those days when all it took was a bushing touch to get all stirred up. The love continuing on was beautifully written. I enjoyed your English Sonnet very much. Judy
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I remember those days when all it took was a bushing touch to get all stirred up. The love continuing on was beautifully written. I enjoyed your English Sonnet very much. Judy
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009