CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 79 "Phone-y Sex"A collection of poetry
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Comment from PoetinTraining
very sensual, funny and perverted like at the same time. Great reading. Uniquely original and enjoyable reading. Perfect Title to go with this. PiT 2/1/09
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very sensual, funny and perverted like at the same time. Great reading. Uniquely original and enjoyable reading. Perfect Title to go with this. PiT 2/1/09
Comment Written 01-Feb-2009
Comment from Curt Mongold
Good, then I won't be alone! LOL!
I thought you did a fantastic job with this entry into the contest cuz! A little twist at the end is always good to me and the subject matter is spot on. It would be an embarassing situation though, wouldn't it?
Best of luck,
Curt
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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Good, then I won't be alone! LOL!
I thought you did a fantastic job with this entry into the contest cuz! A little twist at the end is always good to me and the subject matter is spot on. It would be an embarassing situation though, wouldn't it?
Best of luck,
Curt
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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I had a reader tell me this very thing happened to her and it took her days to get over it!! HA!! Well, you've managed to bring out the naughty in me again. Not getting many reviews, as that big yellow traffic sign stops most! LOL!! I haven't even commented on yours yet, because it is so BAD, I don't even know what to say. Maybe I'll just go in there and write about just how BAD it is! HA! Thanks, Cuz.....
Comment from adewpearl
Sue, as you're burning in hell, know that you sacrificed yourself to give me a jolly laugh - telling some strange man on the phone you're offering yourself up for anal sex - really!!!! I'm just shocked and appalled and laughing my head off. :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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Sue, as you're burning in hell, know that you sacrificed yourself to give me a jolly laugh - telling some strange man on the phone you're offering yourself up for anal sex - really!!!! I'm just shocked and appalled and laughing my head off. :-) Brooke
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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NOW WAIT A MINUTE HERE!!!!! Who's the naughty one?!! I never said a word about anal sex! LMAO!!! OMG, you have such a dirty mind. It's time you wrote one of these yourself! LOL!!!! I think that anyone who reads this can "take it any way they want". HA!!!!!! Brooke, we've got to sit down one day and have that cup of tea and laugh up a storm! Oh, my. I'm laughing so hard, I've got tears coming out of my eyes. I'm the one SHOCKED and APPALLED that your mind went that way! Gotta run so I can stop laughing....
Comment from Minglement
Well, if you do, you'll be in good company, I'm sure! This is too funny. Great entry for the contest with a fun twist at the end. Good luck.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Well, if you do, you'll be in good company, I'm sure! This is too funny. Great entry for the contest with a fun twist at the end. Good luck.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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LOL!!!! I'm cracking up here!!! Marcia, thanks for the comforting thought. HA! Thanks for this very kind and FUN review! :-)) Sue
Comment from Hitcher
Ahhhhh! You posted Sue, congrat's friend, you know how I feel, you did a great job of letting your friends on site know you can GET DOWN with the best and have some harmless fun with out tarnishing your reputation in some eyes. I like this little fun side of you friend, we all have it some just prefer to pretend they don't. I of course am not one of them, ha ha.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Ahhhhh! You posted Sue, congrat's friend, you know how I feel, you did a great job of letting your friends on site know you can GET DOWN with the best and have some harmless fun with out tarnishing your reputation in some eyes. I like this little fun side of you friend, we all have it some just prefer to pretend they don't. I of course am not one of them, ha ha.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Now, Mr. Hitch, I have no idea what you are speaking of. I write nothing of the sort you mention! My word! Is there another using my name? Is there someone out there wanting to blemish my reputation? I won't have it, I tell you. Again, I have absolutely no idea what tales are being spun around here. I thank you for making me aware, though. Sincerely, Miss Priss
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Must be your doppleganger, I like her! ha ha
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HA!! So you've MET her!!!
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Yea, she's real Naughty!
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Yea, she's real Naughty!
Comment from Vladilynn
Still cracked me up!!!!!!! haaaa..haaaaaaa...don't worry you're still an innocent one! LOLL
great sense of humour!!!
lovely written as well!! goodluck!!!!
love much
Lynn ( ^ _____________ ^ )
(smiling grinning)
Nice meeting you!!!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Still cracked me up!!!!!!! haaaa..haaaaaaa...don't worry you're still an innocent one! LOLL
great sense of humour!!!
lovely written as well!! goodluck!!!!
love much
Lynn ( ^ _____________ ^ )
(smiling grinning)
Nice meeting you!!!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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LOVE SEEING THE LAUGHTER!!!! HA!! Makes it ALL worthwhile. I so want to retain my "prim and proper" reputation! Did I really write this? LOL!!! Thanks so much for your great and fun review! :-)) Sue
you'll be fine!!! more prima erotic queen are been set in Hell~with a halo!! loll
so don't worry too much!! ooooppssssss..I think I'm one of them!! loll
hopefully you'll have a peek on my post too!! I'm having an error problem and shows that I didn't posted yet my entry..but actually it's been posted there for a while~: )
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Yeah, I'm gonna drop-kick this "Miss Prim 'n Proper" reputation. I'm gonna let it all hang out! LOL!!!!
What's the name of your poem?
mmmm....it's a lengthy one ok!!
http://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?id=251024
enjoy ..hopefully you'll like it!!
: P
your funny!! ( ^ __________ < )
Comment from Domino
See ya in 'hell' Sue, LOL.
Great ta see your naughty side. Although very raunchy, it's such good fun that it'd be 'hard' ta take offence, IMHO, thou some probably will :-)
Anyway, gotta dash somewhere wiv visions of your
'ass in the air'. Blimey, whew! ;-) ;-) :-) Ray xx
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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See ya in 'hell' Sue, LOL.
Great ta see your naughty side. Although very raunchy, it's such good fun that it'd be 'hard' ta take offence, IMHO, thou some probably will :-)
Anyway, gotta dash somewhere wiv visions of your
'ass in the air'. Blimey, whew! ;-) ;-) :-) Ray xx
Comment Written 27-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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OMG!! If you say this is "raunchy", then I'd better disable it. LOL!! See me in hell? HA!!! Maybe I should take out the "ass in the air" thingy. I felt that in order for it to work in a funny way, she had to talk a wee bit more than "honey I want your hot kisses". LMAO!!!! Well, it has that BIG YELLOW TRAFFIC sign on it, so I guess I'll leave it be for awhile. Thanks for reviewing :-))
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Don't ya dare disable it!
It's original, funny and horny. Seems ta suit the contest perfectly! xx
Comment from Algernon
HAHA...
Miss Prim and proper you do like your F word.
Gosh you are a lass and a half. Such a wicked humour.
Psst. I'll seya behind the bike shed after school.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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HAHA...
Miss Prim and proper you do like your F word.
Gosh you are a lass and a half. Such a wicked humour.
Psst. I'll seya behind the bike shed after school.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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One must drop the F-bomb occasionally. Ha!! The other one was pure frustration and this one is for humour. Miss Prim would be SO one-dimensional without being able to express. lol!! :-)) Sue
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But what about the bikeshed, I'll carry your books home.
Comment from NightWriter
"Phone-y Sex" is a hot and funny poem of lust and mistaken identities. Well written with perfect rhythm and rhyming from beginning to end. Bravo!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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"Phone-y Sex" is a hot and funny poem of lust and mistaken identities. Well written with perfect rhythm and rhyming from beginning to end. Bravo!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Well, I most certainly wanted to keep it fun with that dash of dirt! HA! Thanks very much for your review. And your compliments. :-)) Sue
Comment from Dreamdancer
LOL...
I am still laughing! I wonder how many people this has happened to... Awesome write my friend and a stand alone winner if you ask me... Dreamdancer
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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LOL...
I am still laughing! I wonder how many people this has happened to... Awesome write my friend and a stand alone winner if you ask me... Dreamdancer
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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'my bad? LOL!! Not getting too many reviews on this one. As soon as that big yellow traffic sign pops up, they bolt! HA! So glad you got a good laugh out of this! Believe it or not, one of my first reviewers was amazed I wrote this because she said it happened to her just like the poem! HA! Thanks for the big encouragement and for your great review. Always, Sue