CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 86 "In Song or Silence"A collection of poetry
47 total reviews
Comment from RADIO
A beautiful poem and easy to see why it is
recognized poetry with many views
You sure do have a love connection
with your muse. You have perfect rhyme.
Radio
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A beautiful poem and easy to see why it is
recognized poetry with many views
You sure do have a love connection
with your muse. You have perfect rhyme.
Radio
Comment Written 13-Feb-2009
Comment from jshep
Absolutely beautiful, Sue. The sentiments, the flow, the presentation, and rhyme are all superior. 'You are my muse for daily I rejoice, In song or silence, lifting up my voice."- inspirational line. Loved it. The whole poem is very uplifting and inspiring. No changes to recommend as it is so lovely the way it is. Joyce
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Absolutely beautiful, Sue. The sentiments, the flow, the presentation, and rhyme are all superior. 'You are my muse for daily I rejoice, In song or silence, lifting up my voice."- inspirational line. Loved it. The whole poem is very uplifting and inspiring. No changes to recommend as it is so lovely the way it is. Joyce
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
You did a wonderful job in creating this poem. Your words flow effortlessly as I read. It was my pleasure. I wish you good luck in the contest.
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You did a wonderful job in creating this poem. Your words flow effortlessly as I read. It was my pleasure. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
Comment from LadyBrendragon
I like the image of you and your muse lifting your voices in harmony, a blending of mind and spirit that carried over into silence that is natural and comfortable and binds you even when it's time to put your muse away for the night. Nicely done.
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I like the image of you and your muse lifting your voices in harmony, a blending of mind and spirit that carried over into silence that is natural and comfortable and binds you even when it's time to put your muse away for the night. Nicely done.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
Comment from NightWriter
"In Song or Silence" is a beautifully written poem that reads very smooth from beginning to end. These contests don't look easy, but you make it look easy. Poem has perfect rhythm and rhyming and reads fast. I loved it.
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"In Song or Silence" is a beautifully written poem that reads very smooth from beginning to end. These contests don't look easy, but you make it look easy. Poem has perfect rhythm and rhyming and reads fast. I loved it.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
Comment from wierdgrace
once again I find another wonderful entry into a contest from a great poet, this is wonderful, and I am glad i check the contest before I went to bed, good luck and I hope you win.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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once again I find another wonderful entry into a contest from a great poet, this is wonderful, and I am glad i check the contest before I went to bed, good luck and I hope you win.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Hi Grace, (you know it's hard for me to call you weird!!! - ha!), So glad you dropped in for a read. I do love a sonnet. So glad you enjoyed it! Big hugs to you, Sue
Comment from Minglement
This is absolutely beautiful. What a great sense you have for ryhme and rythm. I know this followed a specifice form, but you made if flow so beautifully. Wonderful. Good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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This is absolutely beautiful. What a great sense you have for ryhme and rythm. I know this followed a specifice form, but you made if flow so beautifully. Wonderful. Good luck.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Marcia, thank you for your lovely compliments. And your great review. Always appreciated :-)) Sue
Comment from RapturedHeart
This is a wonderfully beautiful tribute to your muse, Sixteezkid.
But distance doesn't separate the heart
For bridges made of love, will keep us nigh - I just love these lines. There is no distance in the heart. Powerful entry. All the best in the contest,
Heather
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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This is a wonderfully beautiful tribute to your muse, Sixteezkid.
But distance doesn't separate the heart
For bridges made of love, will keep us nigh - I just love these lines. There is no distance in the heart. Powerful entry. All the best in the contest,
Heather
Comment Written 23-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Heather, thank you for your very nice compliments and for highlighting the lines you enjoyed. I appreciate your review. With regards, Sue
Comment from Just2Write
I enoyed this contest entry very much. The sonnet is well written and expresses your feelings for your muse beautifully. Nothing to fix or change. Rose.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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I enoyed this contest entry very much. The sonnet is well written and expresses your feelings for your muse beautifully. Nothing to fix or change. Rose.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Rose, it is an excellent contest. I do love a sonnet! Thank you for your very kind review and lovely compliments. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from fictionwriter
Wonderful job. I liked the picture that this poem brought to my mind. What a wonderful verse, with a natural flow. I see what you painted for me. Great job.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Wonderful job. I liked the picture that this poem brought to my mind. What a wonderful verse, with a natural flow. I see what you painted for me. Great job.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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fictionwriter, So glad you enjoyed this sonnet! Thank you for saying you "saw" it. Very kind compliment. And thank you for your review. :-)) Sue