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A collection of poetry

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Comment from JoAnna Lee
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Ahhh... I think many of us were John Wayne fans. You have penned a fine tribute in nice poetic form. Nice read.

Thanks for sharing,
Donna

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

Comment from DreamChaser
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What a wonderful tribute to an amazing man. I loved his movies and the fact that he was an all around good guy. I still can't atand the actor who killed him in "Cowboys".
You did a great job on this poem with the rhyme and flow. Thanks for sharing this.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2009

Comment from dportwood
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Sixteezkid,

This is a most appropriate tribute to one of the greatest western stars to ever grace the silver screen. I love the structure and rhyming pattern of the poem, and of course, the subject. Nicely done.

Duane

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
    Duane, Gotta love the Duke! Yes, his films are always great to watch. Only one him....and I really enjoyed writing this bit about him. Thank you for your very generous review. With regards, Sue
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
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great presentation, topic and tribute too! well written throughout; brings back memories too; not a thing to correct!

loved this:

"Our nation loved this rugged guy
A film star, even so...
He was a figure, honored high
True grit; no average Joe"

Great ending!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2009

Comment from Roisin
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Wow! You're really churning out great poems! Another wonderful offering with great rhyme and rhythm. It's a wonderful tribute to one of the greatest actors ever.

Warm regards.

Roisin

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
    Roisin, yeah, I've been working a lot because I'm in lockdown with this severe weather. Staying in the sub-zero temperatures with tons of snow. I feel as though I've been transported to the Arctic Circle! Ha! So, I just keep on writing. Thank you for your lovely review. Sue
reply by Roisin on 17-Jan-2009
    Ooooh! You're so lucky. What my children wouldn't give to see some snow. We haven't really had any here in the last four years or so. My five year old wouldn't even remember. Well, it's certainly doing your writing the world of good. Keep up the good work.

    Warm regards.

    Roisin
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
    I'll trade places with you for a week and then see how fast you wanna get out of it! HA!!
Comment from Vallachi
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What an interesting choice for something to write about. The duke, the great one, my hero. You did an excellent job at writing about him. I found it really good. I have always loved John Wayne and any movie he is in. They are always my favorite.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
    Vallachi, so glad you liked this poem! And I thank you for your very kind review. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from marilyn2
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This is a splendid piece of work. It captures the characters' spirit and sings his praises well. I think he was the hero of the screen for most of his life. I like the way you worked the name of his movie into the poem and left out his real name Marion.
If John Wayne reads this in heaven he will be suitablely impressed.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
    So glad you enjoyed this poem. What a wonderful compliment!! And I thank you for your very generous review. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from chaswriter
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Sue - I am repeating myself but how do you do it? John Wayne was one of my favorite heroes way back when. I didn't miss any of his movies. And I like your rhyming scheme along with the fluid read. Great job. Charlie

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
    Hi Charlie! So glad you liked this poem! As far as how do I do it? Being holed up in this house due to zero degree weather and 12" of snow, I'm trying to stay sane! LOL!!! Whew! If it weren't for writing, not sure how long I WOULD stay sane. Thanks for your great review. I always appreciate you stopping by. :-)) Sue
Comment from Minglement
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Oh, I love this one! 'Course my husband and I are avid John Wayne fans! You eloquently paint him with all those great qualities that we saw in him. What a inspiration he was, and is. Great job.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
    AH! Another big Duke fan! One of a kind and could never be another! So glad you liked this poem! And I thank you for your lovely review. Always appreciated, Sue
reply by Minglement on 17-Jan-2009
    You're so welcome. He was one of a kind and deserved your lovely tribute! Take care, Marcia
Comment from MJMuraco
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Bravo! What a great tribute to the Duke. He is everything that you wrote. John Wayne will always be part of our history and future generations will hear about him Your poem flowed nicely and I thought you did a great job.

MJ

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
    Yeah, "legend" is not an overstatement when it comes to him, that's for sure. So glad you enjoyed this poem. And thank you for such a great review! With regards, Sue