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CSP: A Collection of Poems

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A collection of poetry

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Comment from Minglement
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Well, this tells the whole ugly story! Well done, pardon the pun. You've created a nice entry for the contest with this one. Good luck.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
    Dang it! I just missed out by a coupla votes to Domino! I told him I would get him next time! HA! Thanks so much for your review! :-)) Sue
Comment from saw3152
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Ha Ha! Great humor! I loved this piece, sixteezkid! Hope to read more. You said a lot in only a few words -- and I'm sure we all know what can happen with fork in the toaster.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
    I have had a few reviews here where they've 'fessed up to doing it! HA!! I did it as a child and Mom tore into me. Had one reviewer tell me her sister did it and the electricity knocked her back! Jeezuz! Yes, I have a streak of sick humor at times! :-)) Sue
Comment from LadyMary
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I think everyone can relate to this, although hopefully not requiring the ambulance. Good creativity shown. Excellent entry for humour senryu. LadyMary

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
    Thank you very much for your generous review and compliments! Sue
Comment from joan marie
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Stuck my finger in one the other day. Didn't need ambulance but I got a giggle out of this one. Don't you hate it when you can't get the bread out. Good Luck, joan marie

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
    Stuck your FINGER in it?!!! Okay, so you don't want to get electrocuted, but you don't mind a burn! HA!! Why can't someone invent a toaster where one's bread just CAN'T get stuck? Hmmmm...maybe my new business venture! Thanks for your review and funny little anecdote. ;-)) Sue
reply by joan marie on 07-Jan-2009
    Set on on fire once too. I guess me and toaster just don't get along. But I hate toaster ovens. jm
Comment from wierdgrace
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this is so true, when I was a kid, my sister did that, and of course it only shocked her enough to throw her, but she never did it again, great poem good luck no errors.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
    Jeezuz, it threw her??!! Wow! You can BET she never did it again! Scary... Thanks so much for your generous review. :-)) Sue
reply by wierdgrace on 07-Jan-2009
    u r so welcome
Comment from Curt Mongold
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Hey, isn't this something I voted for? Why yes it is! LOL!
Great senryu cuz. Made me laugh because it's so true! Best wishes in the contest!
Sincerely,
Curt

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
    Dang, it was neck and neck between Ray and I. He just won. He told me he learned how to beat the system and vote for himself! LOL!!! All great fun. Thanks for your vote! Big Hugs Cuz,
Comment from Debbie1165
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Dear Sixteezkid, OMG that is just like something I would do...very good work...and the art work is perfect..good luck in the contest..God bless.

debbie1165

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
    Don't you dare do it!!! Use a wooden spoon instead! HA!! Thanks for your very kind review! :-)) Sue
reply by Debbie1165 on 07-Jan-2009
    lol...your welcome.....I enjoy your good humor...best wishes.
Comment from JoAnna Lee
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Definately one of the better ones. Quite funny (I think we're all a bit sick - LOL). I wish you luck.

Thanks for sharing,
Donna

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
    Yes, this is sick and twisted humor. A bit like laughing when one sees a grownup fall down! OMG...am I bad or what?!! LOL! Thanks for your great review and sick response! :-)) Sue
Comment from mark tree
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sixteenzkid a good senryu for the contest. I guess it has humor in a slightly
twisted sorta of way. Good luck to you in the contest.
marcus....

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
    Marcus, thank you for your review. And for your well-wishes in the contest. With regards, Sue
Comment from skye
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Your senryu/haiku is wonderfully imaginative, using great images and a strong last line. Hopefully, we all know better. LOL
These structured forms are often the most difficult to write.
Very well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
    Hello skye. Yes, these haiku are tough. What a great exercise to stretch the mind (and hone word usage). Thank you very much for your generous review and comments. With regards, Sue