CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from allborn66
It is a very interesting form. I like your example of it; it is very expressive. I enjoyed this poem, and the picture goes quite well.
Barbara
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It is a very interesting form. I like your example of it; it is very expressive. I enjoyed this poem, and the picture goes quite well.
Barbara
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
Comment from Sam Manilla
You described doubt so well. I liked the use of the multiple "D" words. It seemed to add to the poem. I also liked the word "negating". Doubt does seem to have a way of taking away from that which could be good. Enjoyed your look at doubt. WRite on!
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You described doubt so well. I liked the use of the multiple "D" words. It seemed to add to the poem. I also liked the word "negating". Doubt does seem to have a way of taking away from that which could be good. Enjoyed your look at doubt. WRite on!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
Comment from dportwood
Sixteezkid,
You have followed one of the descriptions of a cinquain very well and the format and structure are perfectly done.
Duane
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Sixteezkid,
You have followed one of the descriptions of a cinquain very well and the format and structure are perfectly done.
Duane
Comment Written 17-Dec-2008
Comment from JoAnna Lee
This is wonderful! The description is perfect. The poetic form is perfect. There is nothing that is not perfect. I wish I still had a 6er for ya!
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
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This is wonderful! The description is perfect. The poetic form is perfect. There is nothing that is not perfect. I wish I still had a 6er for ya!
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
Comment Written 17-Dec-2008
Comment from RSayre45
Really great job! What a wonderful description of doubt, each word clearly telling a description or detailing the effects of doubt.
Very nicely done. Very interesting picture associated with the poem as well. Thanks for sharing!
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Really great job! What a wonderful description of doubt, each word clearly telling a description or detailing the effects of doubt.
Very nicely done. Very interesting picture associated with the poem as well. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2008
Comment from adewpearl
thievery of clear thought - what a great image to define doubt
that is my absolute favorite line
I love the repetition of the D in doubt, disruptive, deceiving - that links the lines so well and is even picked up in indecision so that all five lines are linked
this is quite good!!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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thievery of clear thought - what a great image to define doubt
that is my absolute favorite line
I love the repetition of the D in doubt, disruptive, deceiving - that links the lines so well and is even picked up in indecision so that all five lines are linked
this is quite good!!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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Brooke, I just love your reviews. Did you know that??!! Because you offer great advice where needed or compliment so kindly. (or both! -ha!)....Your attention to detail is what is so nice to see. And I thank you for it. And for this lovely review. :-)) Sue
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tell that to Tom and his review board who month after month refuse to make me reviewer of the month despite 60 or more nominations each month ! LOL
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well, here's another one for you :-))
Comment from Joan E.
It's amazing how much content you packed into eleven words.
My favorite phrase was "Thievery of clear thought".
And I very much enjoyed your use of alliteration with the "d's" and "t's".
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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It's amazing how much content you packed into eleven words.
My favorite phrase was "Thievery of clear thought".
And I very much enjoyed your use of alliteration with the "d's" and "t's".
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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Joan E. - and that's why I just love doing these strict formats. Great practice to keep on one's toes for word usage! Thank you so much for your most kind review and lovely comments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Pen&Ink
Hi Sixteezkid,
As far as I can tell, you've met all the requirements for a modified Cinquain. You did well in matching a picture to your words. The words you chose work well together in conveying the message. Good job.
Ray
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Hi Sixteezkid,
As far as I can tell, you've met all the requirements for a modified Cinquain. You did well in matching a picture to your words. The words you chose work well together in conveying the message. Good job.
Ray
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
Comment from mark tree
Sixteenzkid very nice little verse that take us from doubt to indecision with very descriptive words of emotion. good read.
mark tree....
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Sixteenzkid very nice little verse that take us from doubt to indecision with very descriptive words of emotion. good read.
mark tree....
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
Comment from Susan E. Pennycuff
Great job on this one, and let me tell you... I am always respectful of those who put instructions in the author notes to form poetry. It shows they not only know what they are doing but have respect for those who might not understand the form they posted and are willing to teach. I commend you on the effort you have shown to help those.
Have a wonderful day! Suzi
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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Great job on this one, and let me tell you... I am always respectful of those who put instructions in the author notes to form poetry. It shows they not only know what they are doing but have respect for those who might not understand the form they posted and are willing to teach. I commend you on the effort you have shown to help those.
Have a wonderful day! Suzi
Comment Written 16-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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Susan, I agree that the poetry form should accompany author's notes. It is because of all the great people here who have done that, that I learned to understand the format and take up the challenge myself. So, I most certainly want to keep the sharing going. Thank you for your most kind review and very nice words. With regards, Sue