Comment from Scarlettdreams

Excellent

Very cute. This might just be the best one so far that I have read. Good luck in the contest. This is well done naughty humor. Bravo Bravo

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2008

Comment from zeezeewriter

Excellent

Excellent entry in the contest. I really liked the meter and the rhyme. You have a great way with words and the genre. Good luck. I enjoyed the read and the picture as well. ZeeZee

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2008

Comment from Judian James

Excellent

Oh it's voting time already and somehow I missed this little gem. Well rhymed and versed. Great picture to accompany the words. fun piece Sue.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2008

Comment from Logicat

Excellent

Very upfront moment of truth for the uninitiated in the ways of a woman. You've written it quite well, in a pleasant poem that well deserves the excellent ratings it has received.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2008

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Sue,

This is naughty, but just too funny. You have the guts to express words that women are not daring enough to say.

I can't stop laughing at this one. LOL!

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2008

Dear Poetic Friend, yes...touched on a "touchy" subject! HA! Charles Keith warned me I may get kicked out of the woman's union! LOL!! This contest has been more than fun. Thanks for your review. :-)) Sue

Comment from Firefly54

Excellent

Peter? I've never heard it called Peter before. Have I missed out here? Is this a term from over the pond? Loved the poem though - especially the last couple of lines!

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2008

Peter picked a peck of WHAT?? LOL!! I thought for sure that along with Willy, Peter "stood out" in the crowd in the be "E". Glad you liked! Thanks much for your review. :-)) Sue

reply by Firefly54 on 14-Dec-2008

Hahaha... oh, yes....!

Comment from babylonia

Excellent

ahhhh .... the big O .... :P
made me smile. made me laugh. made me miss the good ole days. LOL this is cute. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. stanzas are well written. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2008

LOL!! The big "O" - laughing all over myself!! - Barbara, so glad you enjoyed this bit o' fun. And thanks for your great review and comments. :-)) Sue

reply by babylonia on 14-Dec-2008

sue,
you are very welcome. well, you were talking about my favorite subject. :P
one, i seem to recall from somewhere in the past. LOL just kidding. thanks for the giggle.
love,
barbara

Comment from Charles Keith

Excellent

Heh heh you have admitted something we all suspected. I have feeling you will get a visit from a 'female union' member.

I hope they don't exclude you. I think you might have to pay extra dues though LOL.

Good luck
Keith

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2008

Ha! I've already been told to speak for myself!! So, the union may have up before the board soon! Glad you enjoyed this little bit of fun. And thanks for your very kind review. :-) Sue

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Good cadence and fun rhyming couplets - as for the faking it thing - speak for yourself, darlin' LOL
I must do my duty??? What century were your 60's in??? LOL
love the wheel/squeal pairing very funny!!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008

Brooke, I love you!!! What century was my 60's in?!!! LOL!!! You're killing me, I'm laughing so hard. Thanks for highlighting the wheel/squeal thing after you chewed my ass out!! LOL!!! Sue

Comment from Gypsymooncat

Excellent

Oh, this is good! Yes, fakery is fine now and then, and those times when it's fer real ... well, we know, don't we?

So, keep right on squealin'! This is a beauty, and very best of luck to you! xoxoxoxo PS: Don't ya love this naughty contest??

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2008