CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 135 "No Regret"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Minglement
this is a great entry for the contest. Lovely poem with a key message, beautifully presented with great artwork and color mood. Good luck.
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this is a great entry for the contest. Lovely poem with a key message, beautifully presented with great artwork and color mood. Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
Comment from Nightwind1
This is a loving poem with a great message. We should all learn to forgive. The world would find peace. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a loving poem with a great message. We should all learn to forgive. The world would find peace. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
Comment from jshep
Great job on this poem, S. You have said such true words. Forgiveness has to come from both the mind and the heart or there is no peace found. Love the flow of this poem, and the message- no regrets. Excellent,and good luck in contest. Joyce
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Great job on this poem, S. You have said such true words. Forgiveness has to come from both the mind and the heart or there is no peace found. Love the flow of this poem, and the message- no regrets. Excellent,and good luck in contest. Joyce
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
Comment from Word Weaver
Oh, this is wonderful, my dear!
I like the way you think of forgiveness as something that the heart always longs for and that it's the key for happiness. Thanks for this wonderful tribute to peace.
Yours,
Word Weaver
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2008
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Oh, this is wonderful, my dear!
I like the way you think of forgiveness as something that the heart always longs for and that it's the key for happiness. Thanks for this wonderful tribute to peace.
Yours,
Word Weaver
Comment Written 09-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2008
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Word Weaver, thank you so much for your very kind review and lovely words. Am so happy you enjoyed this piece. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Gramma Kathy
This is so true, so real. You have brought out an important truth in your beautiful poem.
You are right: forgiveness is the key to peace, solace and freedom from regret. This hits close to home for me today, and I thank you.
Blessings, Gramma Kathy
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2008
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This is so true, so real. You have brought out an important truth in your beautiful poem.
You are right: forgiveness is the key to peace, solace and freedom from regret. This hits close to home for me today, and I thank you.
Blessings, Gramma Kathy
Comment Written 09-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2008
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Gramma, nothing worse than holding on to anger. Our biggest enemy! I wrote this at a much-needed time for myself. So glad it meant something to you. Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Vallachi
wow thia ia great
i like the abba scheme
Yes forgiveness is important to open our hearts to love
You have said some meaningful things in this poem
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2008
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wow thia ia great
i like the abba scheme
Yes forgiveness is important to open our hearts to love
You have said some meaningful things in this poem
Comment Written 09-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2008
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Vallachi, yes, my first abba and liked working with it. Challenging. So glad it resonated with you! With regards, Sue
Comment from Kaze
Forgiveness is the greatest kind of revenge out there... it puts you at ease, and regardless of the perpetrator`s initial intentions, has its desired effect on the. Great poem--loved the picture too.
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Forgiveness is the greatest kind of revenge out there... it puts you at ease, and regardless of the perpetrator`s initial intentions, has its desired effect on the. Great poem--loved the picture too.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2008
Comment from Charles Keith
Hello Six,
This is a really nice poem and the message is a very intellient one. You could nor be more right. Forgiving relaeses us from the poison that hurts us more thamn those that wronged us.
Excellent sentiments!
Kindest regards
Keith
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Hello Six,
This is a really nice poem and the message is a very intellient one. You could nor be more right. Forgiving relaeses us from the poison that hurts us more thamn those that wronged us.
Excellent sentiments!
Kindest regards
Keith
Comment Written 09-Dec-2008
Comment from guerillapoet
Very nice, DEEP poem : )
I liked the style very much. You used the rhyme well. I liked the repeating line. The poem had a lot of depth and it spoke a lot in just 12 lines.
Overall a nice piece and a great contest entry.
Thanks for the read,
GP
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Very nice, DEEP poem : )
I liked the style very much. You used the rhyme well. I liked the repeating line. The poem had a lot of depth and it spoke a lot in just 12 lines.
Overall a nice piece and a great contest entry.
Thanks for the read,
GP
Comment Written 09-Dec-2008
Comment from mjarabrab
I thought this was lovely,and your photo compliments this wonderfully. I love poems about forgiveness, or how to move forward and live life as we can, so this is another reason why yours was one I am glad I read.
I can't comment on the style, since I"m not educated in that, but what I see is the originality of your piece, and a wonderfull message,
take care,
Mj
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I thought this was lovely,and your photo compliments this wonderfully. I love poems about forgiveness, or how to move forward and live life as we can, so this is another reason why yours was one I am glad I read.
I can't comment on the style, since I"m not educated in that, but what I see is the originality of your piece, and a wonderfull message,
take care,
Mj
Comment Written 09-Dec-2008