CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 137 "Surf's Up!"A collection of poetry
36 total reviews
Comment from Oatmeal
Sixteezkid,
I have never seen this style before. At least not that I remember. You did a wonderful job with it.
The theme was nice. The syllable count was correct. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.
I wish you luck in the contest. Good job!
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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Sixteezkid,
I have never seen this style before. At least not that I remember. You did a wonderful job with it.
The theme was nice. The syllable count was correct. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.
I wish you luck in the contest. Good job!
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 06-Dec-2008
Comment from allborn66
This is a great poem. An excellent example of this form. I love how it flows. The picture is great. It's a very uplifting poem, though personally I'm hoping for a little snow soon to justify the cold weather we're having.
Barbara
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This is a great poem. An excellent example of this form. I love how it flows. The picture is great. It's a very uplifting poem, though personally I'm hoping for a little snow soon to justify the cold weather we're having.
Barbara
Comment Written 06-Dec-2008
Comment from honeytree
I really enjoyed reading your words here and the art suited your words so well.
"Stunning
Sunning
Punning
Funning
Surfing on this Stunning, Sunning day
Playful in our Punning, Funning way
I loved everyword.
Honeytree.
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I really enjoyed reading your words here and the art suited your words so well.
"Stunning
Sunning
Punning
Funning
Surfing on this Stunning, Sunning day
Playful in our Punning, Funning way
I loved everyword.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
Comment from kassey
Excellent tyburn for the contest. I love the whole presentation and the wording all just speaks of fun in the sun. Excellent entry for the contest and I wish you good luck. Kay
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Excellent tyburn for the contest. I love the whole presentation and the wording all just speaks of fun in the sun. Excellent entry for the contest and I wish you good luck. Kay
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
sounds like great fun, i'm obviusly in the wrong place its always cold here even in the summer we don't get the weather we should. i hope your clever little poem does well in the contest good luck
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
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sounds like great fun, i'm obviusly in the wrong place its always cold here even in the summer we don't get the weather we should. i hope your clever little poem does well in the contest good luck
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
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I'm in the midwest now and freezing it ALL off!! Reminiscing here about the times we had in Australia. Sure would love to be there now! Thanks so much for your very kind review and well-wishes in the contest. Most appreciated, Sue
Comment from GentleWind
What a perky poem! The artwork is perfect. It adds to the imagery and this flows well. Brings back my own memories of beach time fun in Fl. Good job
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What a perky poem! The artwork is perfect. It adds to the imagery and this flows well. Brings back my own memories of beach time fun in Fl. Good job
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from adewpearl
Playful is the operative word here - this has a lovely light tone to it - not taking yourself, your poem or the world too seriously - just funning! LOL This is a great romp through sheer happy word pleasure
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Playful is the operative word here - this has a lovely light tone to it - not taking yourself, your poem or the world too seriously - just funning! LOL This is a great romp through sheer happy word pleasure
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Glad you felt the fun tone, Brooke. I'm a sucker for these contests, to learn. This one was very different. Enjoyed it. With regards, Sue
Comment from wierdgrace
Monday I take a trip to the coast and well relax to the beach and write some more. This I need badly, thank you for your poem, and your wonderful, art.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Monday I take a trip to the coast and well relax to the beach and write some more. This I need badly, thank you for your poem, and your wonderful, art.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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I'm jealous!! Here in Ohio now and was reminiscing about the beach, so had to write about it. Thanks for your very nice review! With regards, Sue
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haha sorry about that, I will bring back pictures, and write a short story when I get back.
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I'm sure YOU WILL!!! Can't wait to read about it. We will all be drooling!! HA!! Have a very fun, safe trip!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Sixteezkid
your Tyburn poem is indeed fun and very lively
almost sounds like riddle
love that last lines with rhyming internal words.
The best to you in this contest.
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Hello Sixteezkid
your Tyburn poem is indeed fun and very lively
almost sounds like riddle
love that last lines with rhyming internal words.
The best to you in this contest.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Thanks Gert, your reviews are always a pleasure. I always appreciate your specific comments. Thanks for the well-wishes. With regards, sue
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Sixteezkid
you are welcome .
Have a pleasnt evening
Gert
Comment from bard owl
You cannot imagine how much fun this sounds like to me. It is so cold here in Missouri today, makes me wish I could hibernate! Surf and sun sounds sooo inviting. This is such an upbeat poem. It was a sunny pleasure to read. Blessings to you and best of luck in the contest, Linda
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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You cannot imagine how much fun this sounds like to me. It is so cold here in Missouri today, makes me wish I could hibernate! Surf and sun sounds sooo inviting. This is such an upbeat poem. It was a sunny pleasure to read. Blessings to you and best of luck in the contest, Linda
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Linda, I'm freezing as well up here in Ohio!!! Had to recall those wonderful days in the sun, as they are much needed right now! Ha!! Thanks so much for your very kind review. With warmest regards, Sue