CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 138 "The feeling's mutual..."A collection of poetry
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Comment from E. W. Crowe
I don't know if it's genius, but I often stare at a blank computer screen. Hmmmmm. Maybe I'm on to something. I see this a poem of hope. Good Job, 60's.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2008
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I don't know if it's genius, but I often stare at a blank computer screen. Hmmmmm. Maybe I'm on to something. I see this a poem of hope. Good Job, 60's.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2008
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Ha!!! It IS the genius wanting to come out!!! So glad you liked the poem! Now I've got to go back and look at that "blankety-blank" blank canvas! Sue
Comment from RMalecki
Simple but with a great message about creativity and the art that one can make.
"Wanting to be brushed
By strokes of genius"
Great lines and very motivational.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2008
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Simple but with a great message about creativity and the art that one can make.
"Wanting to be brushed
By strokes of genius"
Great lines and very motivational.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2008
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Thanks so much for your great review and comments! Sue
Comment from Susan E. Pennycuff
nice Naani poem here... kinda looks like your talking directly at me to be honest... and that looks like my canvas lately... lol ( it actually isn't all that funny, but can't help but laugh cause it is so pathetic, my muse just up and left me for another writer I guess... lol) anyway, all jokes aside... wonderful write here, best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2008
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nice Naani poem here... kinda looks like your talking directly at me to be honest... and that looks like my canvas lately... lol ( it actually isn't all that funny, but can't help but laugh cause it is so pathetic, my muse just up and left me for another writer I guess... lol) anyway, all jokes aside... wonderful write here, best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2008
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Don't remind me. "Where's my muse?" !!!!!! Thanks so much for your great review and funny comments!!!! Sue
Comment from Scarlettdreams
What a profound little write. I am impressed by these few words that paint a really big picture. smiles. Very well done. Bravo Bravo
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What a profound little write. I am impressed by these few words that paint a really big picture. smiles. Very well done. Bravo Bravo
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2008
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Scarlettdreams, thank you for this most kind review. So glad you enjoyed it! With regards, Sue
Comment from LegendaryAngel
Great job on capturing on the most difficult things of an artist: what to put on that blank canvas. Personally as an artist, i found the poetic and artisitc quality which appealed to me. Loved reading it, best wishes.
LA
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Great job on capturing on the most difficult things of an artist: what to put on that blank canvas. Personally as an artist, i found the poetic and artisitc quality which appealed to me. Loved reading it, best wishes.
LA
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
Comment from mermaids
I love this, it is as if the canvas is speaking, creative and unique. I love art and this is a wonderful poem about art, good work
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I love this, it is as if the canvas is speaking, creative and unique. I love art and this is a wonderful poem about art, good work
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
Comment from Ian Ayris
Stark and beautiful at the same time. I love the feel of this, pregnant with so much potential. Before the beginning of all things. Just a couple of suggestions. I think it could do with a couple of stronger verbs in the middle two lines. Something like 'Silently' in place of 'Blankly and perhaps 'Longing' or 'Yearning' or something like that in place of 'Wanting'. Just suggestions, nothing more.
Really enjoyed this most original piece of work.
Warmest regards,
Ian
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Stark and beautiful at the same time. I love the feel of this, pregnant with so much potential. Before the beginning of all things. Just a couple of suggestions. I think it could do with a couple of stronger verbs in the middle two lines. Something like 'Silently' in place of 'Blankly and perhaps 'Longing' or 'Yearning' or something like that in place of 'Wanting'. Just suggestions, nothing more.
Really enjoyed this most original piece of work.
Warmest regards,
Ian
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This is funny but I'm sure many of us can relate. Your picture along with your poem go nicely together and I loved the author notes because I didn't know what a Naani was
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This is funny but I'm sure many of us can relate. Your picture along with your poem go nicely together and I loved the author notes because I didn't know what a Naani was
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
Comment from Dave Austin
Naani is a new one on me, Sixteezkid, but any composer of words or music can't help but know exactly what you're talking about. Great! Love, daver
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Naani is a new one on me, Sixteezkid, but any composer of words or music can't help but know exactly what you're talking about. Great! Love, daver
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008
Comment from LScribeHarris
Very nice. I really like this poem--you used the idea of that achingly white canvas, how the artist herself desires to paint so desperately that she can transfer her own desires onto a personified canvas. You also showed potential, using a common idiom "stroke of genius" in a new and creative way. Very well done.
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Very nice. I really like this poem--you used the idea of that achingly white canvas, how the artist herself desires to paint so desperately that she can transfer her own desires onto a personified canvas. You also showed potential, using a common idiom "stroke of genius" in a new and creative way. Very well done.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2008