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Reaching my Soul

True love story

28 total reviews 
Comment from minopavlic
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The eloquence of your writing has in its own nature a mystifying , yet captivating magnetism that embraces the reader.I find myself captivated within your artistic form of expression.

Quality writing that complements the author

Thanks for sharing
No_obstacle

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2008
    Hi no_obstacle,
    I thank you so much for your most encouraging and kind review. Your words are really most appreciated.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from ~Dovey
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This was very sweet and moving. Excellent work, and I enjoyed the picture you painted here. This was a very enjoyable read! I wish you the best of luck in this contest! :)

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2008
    Thank you Dovey, and so sorry for the late reply, I was not around for some time.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from Diny
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I have fopund life lasting relationsships whilehere on fansstory and can identify with this much- good luck in the contest and with your writing and your love-
Didn't see this one or I'd have entered my best line-
"You're the nearest thing to heaven on this side of the clouds!"
write on-=Di

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2008
    Hi Di,
    Thanks for a lovely review, and sorry for the very late reply, as I was not around for some time now.
    I love your line!
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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This was a unque way to go about this but you certainly did meet the guidelines and I wish you all the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2008
    Thank you so much for the kind review, and sorry for the very late reply, as I was not around for quite some time now,
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from Firefly54
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Reading the entries, this was a fun but quite challenging competition! You have done well, in my humble opinion... I wish you good luck in the competition!

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2008
    Thank you for your very encouraging review and sorry for this very late reply. I was not around for some time.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from eveeator
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Excellent take on the contest, I thought this was really going well and then was upset to read that the bold was your own dialogue and as the last line wasn't bold well I felt pain. Good luck in the contest, keep well regards

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2008
    Thanks for your kind review, and I am sorry for this very late reply. I was not around for some time now.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from wierdgrace
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This is so excellent, the characters, and I loved it, and I found no revisions, and no errors, and its a great entry for the contest. thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2008
    Thank you so much for this very kind review, sorry for the very late reply, for some time I have not been around.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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This is a good piece of writing,
with a different approach, well
presented, making it easy to
understand.

An enjoyable read,

Good luck with the contest,
Margaret.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2008
    Thank you so much, Margaret, and sorry for the very late reply, as I was not around for some time.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from starman
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So what is his name and where does he live? As one who finally married someone I met on the Internet, I can empathise with your feelings.

Very touching end.
:)s

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2008
    Hi starman, is that so ? So it does work after all!! Great.
    No names revieled (yet), dear friend, he is from the US.
    Thanks so much and sorry for the very late reply, as I was not around for some time.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from rmdelta
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PUPA

A great contest entry, PUPA. Excellent writing and so smooth in your narration it just leads us easily through it. Very strong and I wish you the best of luck in this contest.

Reggie

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2008
    Thanks again Reggie, glad you liked my story.
    Love
    Pupa