God Grants ZeeZee an Interview.
God comes to ZeeZee's house for an interview.27 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You're a very good writer. I didn't find any mechanical errors. You didn't use any "" marks, but I'm not sure they're necessary with the way you set the short story us. Your pacing was very good. May you should have offered God something to drink.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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You're a very good writer. I didn't find any mechanical errors. You didn't use any "" marks, but I'm not sure they're necessary with the way you set the short story us. Your pacing was very good. May you should have offered God something to drink.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Hi barbara.wilkey. The contest suggested not using Dialogue "" markers. Therefore I left them out. And you are so correct, about the drink, where are my mannors? Thank you so much for stopping by and reading.. would you care for a beverage? LOL ZeeZee
Comment from IndianaIrish
Oh, Zee, if there's a person alive who should have an interview with God...it's you! Very creative, with the best questions (and answers) I've heard in a long time! Best of luck in the contest.
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Oh, Zee, if there's a person alive who should have an interview with God...it's you! Very creative, with the best questions (and answers) I've heard in a long time! Best of luck in the contest.
Indy :>)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Hey, next time... you get to ask the questions.. this guy has an attitude. Ha Ha. thanks honey. Zee.
Comment from benjan
Very nice entry, ZeeZee.
(If I told you that when you die, you will become pure energy, without knowledge of the past, without memory of the person you are now, how would that make you feel?
Hey, I?m asking the questions here.)
I like how you evaded answering this question. Your questions and God's responses went back and forth well, almost point/counterpoint in some places. I also liked the beginning as 'you' asked about recording the interview. It worked well as a device. Great job. Good luck in the contest. My best to you, Barb ;o)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Very nice entry, ZeeZee.
(If I told you that when you die, you will become pure energy, without knowledge of the past, without memory of the person you are now, how would that make you feel?
Hey, I?m asking the questions here.)
I like how you evaded answering this question. Your questions and God's responses went back and forth well, almost point/counterpoint in some places. I also liked the beginning as 'you' asked about recording the interview. It worked well as a device. Great job. Good luck in the contest. My best to you, Barb ;o)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. My true reward is just to have someone read. It is wonderful to be in the company of other writers. Thanks much. ZeeZee
Comment from wierdgrace
this is one contest I entered too, I needed to write it, and it came from my heart when I wrote, made lots of spags and fixed, but I see this is one with no spags, just faith and love. great interview.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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this is one contest I entered too, I needed to write it, and it came from my heart when I wrote, made lots of spags and fixed, but I see this is one with no spags, just faith and love. great interview.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Your entry was so heartfelt, it was wonderful. Thank you for reading mine. I appreciate being in the same company as you. ZeeZee
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u r so welcome
Comment from Nicnac
You have written an engrossing conversation.
The flow is continuous to the end.
Great interesting read.
You have a wonderful flair for keeping the interest up. No slow and lagging parts.
One suggestion: "Your life is yours; do with as you will." I think adding the word 'it' would make it flow better. "Your life is yours; do with (it) as you will."
Strong entry! I found your author notes amusing as well. ;)
~Nic
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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You have written an engrossing conversation.
The flow is continuous to the end.
Great interesting read.
You have a wonderful flair for keeping the interest up. No slow and lagging parts.
One suggestion: "Your life is yours; do with as you will." I think adding the word 'it' would make it flow better. "Your life is yours; do with (it) as you will."
Strong entry! I found your author notes amusing as well. ;)
~Nic
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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I agree that the one part you pointed out does not flow well. I so appreciate your suggestion. Thanks for reading. ZeeZee
It was my pleasure, ZeeZee.
It was an enjoyable read.
:o)
Comment from Judian James
This was very smart ZeeZee. A really intelligent write with a lot of good questions and humorous, although thought-provoking answers. I loved it. "There is no meaning of life. If you want your life to have meaning, then make it meaningful. Your life is yours; do with as you will" great job girlfriend.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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This was very smart ZeeZee. A really intelligent write with a lot of good questions and humorous, although thought-provoking answers. I loved it. "There is no meaning of life. If you want your life to have meaning, then make it meaningful. Your life is yours; do with as you will" great job girlfriend.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Ahhh Well, you know me. One two.. button my shoe.. three four.. who cares. lol. thanks honey.
Comment from azbukivedi
I believe it. Your version of things, I mean. Better than any organized religion version, for sure. Some great entries in this contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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I believe it. Your version of things, I mean. Better than any organized religion version, for sure. Some great entries in this contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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There are some really good entries. I was so pleased to read them. Thanks for reading this one. ZeeZee
Comment from Annmuma
Interesting, creative and a thinking man's approach to the subject. This is well done and I read it more than once. Good luck in the contest. ann
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Interesting, creative and a thinking man's approach to the subject. This is well done and I read it more than once. Good luck in the contest. ann
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Hi Annmuma. This was a very odd write.. interesting but odd. Interviewing God can be very intimidating. Thanks for reading and leaving such a great review. ZeeZee
Comment from ledford
This is completely sacreligious! (Just kidding-saw your notes). You are smart to put a little disclaimer:-)
"Yeah, try buying week-old bananas ... that?s a joke, God.
I know; I just didn?t think it was very funny." ... Ha! Cute:-)
What ever. ... should be "whatever"
You do a great job of maintaining the theme throughout: "I don't care"
Good luck in the contest:-)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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This is completely sacreligious! (Just kidding-saw your notes). You are smart to put a little disclaimer:-)
"Yeah, try buying week-old bananas ... that?s a joke, God.
I know; I just didn?t think it was very funny." ... Ha! Cute:-)
What ever. ... should be "whatever"
You do a great job of maintaining the theme throughout: "I don't care"
Good luck in the contest:-)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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HI ledford. This was an interesting write. I enjoyed the challenge. Thanks for pointing out the spaggie. Thanks for reading. ZeeZee
Comment from OldVet
Wow. Have to put an extension on my keyboard to avoid any errant lightning strikes. And you talk about me!
Good entry! Like mine, a slightly detached God. Showing man's NEED to believe is a nice touch. Back to energy--there's a concept I can accept. Never bought into the wings and harps idea. But the 70 virgin things sorta got my attenion.
Lots of luck!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Wow. Have to put an extension on my keyboard to avoid any errant lightning strikes. And you talk about me!
Good entry! Like mine, a slightly detached God. Showing man's NEED to believe is a nice touch. Back to energy--there's a concept I can accept. Never bought into the wings and harps idea. But the 70 virgin things sorta got my attenion.
Lots of luck!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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LOL OLDVET... we might get to skip off to the thing called Hell together... perhaps.. Thanks for reading honey. ZeeZee
