CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 150 "Peace, Sweet Peace"A collection of poetry
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Comment from prodigal
Don't mind me. Just looking around. I am going through some of the better poets on this site's first post and looking to see if they have improved since their arrival. This is a very wistful poem. Peace sweet peace. I like it, but I do think you have gotten better. Hope you don't mind me snooping. :) Sam
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Don't mind me. Just looking around. I am going through some of the better poets on this site's first post and looking to see if they have improved since their arrival. This is a very wistful poem. Peace sweet peace. I like it, but I do think you have gotten better. Hope you don't mind me snooping. :) Sam
Comment Written 19-Mar-2009
Comment from jack silver
sometimes when you want to feel and hold onto peace you have to not only put your mind into it you have to put your heat and body into it as well. i felt that with the words you used you described this perfectly and i look forward to reading more.
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sometimes when you want to feel and hold onto peace you have to not only put your mind into it you have to put your heat and body into it as well. i felt that with the words you used you described this perfectly and i look forward to reading more.
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jack
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from Nicollette
Well, that was truly lovely! I was there ..beautiful summers day; birds singing; peaceful walk on an English afternoon, Are you English? (haven't looked at your profile) because you have captured a walk in the woods on a Sunday afternoon in Summer in England! the 'peace sweet peace' enhances this poem alot.
Lovely
All the best
Nicollettex
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Well, that was truly lovely! I was there ..beautiful summers day; birds singing; peaceful walk on an English afternoon, Are you English? (haven't looked at your profile) because you have captured a walk in the woods on a Sunday afternoon in Summer in England! the 'peace sweet peace' enhances this poem alot.
Lovely
All the best
Nicollettex
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Nicollette, So glad you did enjoy my poem! And that you took away from it the beauty we all need in our minds. Your generous review is most appreciated. Kindest regards, Sue (no, not English, but LOVE it there!)
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello 6teezkid,
I truly enjoyed this poem. I am sure that many will relate to and enjoy the serene fee3ings expressed in this poem. I particularly liked the following lines as I have found it to be true of myself:
Stumbled upon in the rarest of
Moments when not sought
(how precious and few are those moments.
however, they are locked into our memories, forevermore.)
This was a soft and delicate poem - a pleasure (treasure) to read. Regards, LateBloomer
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Hello 6teezkid,
I truly enjoyed this poem. I am sure that many will relate to and enjoy the serene fee3ings expressed in this poem. I particularly liked the following lines as I have found it to be true of myself:
Stumbled upon in the rarest of
Moments when not sought
(how precious and few are those moments.
however, they are locked into our memories, forevermore.)
This was a soft and delicate poem - a pleasure (treasure) to read. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Thank you SO much for such uplifting comments! And glad you highlighted the part you liked. You are so right! They are rare moments, and yet we sure don't forget what it feels like - Ha! Again, thanks for your generous review and I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from TamaraTel
You have penned a lovely poem here. I know I long to have that inner peace in my life. Just seems to be out of reach. This poem flowed wonderfully and read real well.
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You have penned a lovely poem here. I know I long to have that inner peace in my life. Just seems to be out of reach. This poem flowed wonderfully and read real well.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
Comment from Alexander E Poet
This is incredibly beautiful. I love poetry
Like this its natural and was one Very descriptive and full of imagery and life refreshing with good imagery Poetry very well done There were no errors. Or No typos. I got my eye on you. I Would change. I look forward to your next poem. Check out one of mines. Good write.
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This is incredibly beautiful. I love poetry
Like this its natural and was one Very descriptive and full of imagery and life refreshing with good imagery Poetry very well done There were no errors. Or No typos. I got my eye on you. I Would change. I look forward to your next poem. Check out one of mines. Good write.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
Comment from PoesyPoet
I really do like the repetive, "peace, sweet peace." It added a rich flavor to this work. I'm glad I happened acrossed it this morning.
PP
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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I really do like the repetive, "peace, sweet peace." It added a rich flavor to this work. I'm glad I happened acrossed it this morning.
PP
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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So glad you commented on the repetition. It has a 50/50 consensus on that! Ha! I really need to keep it there for myself, though. Thank you very much for your generous review and comments! Much appreciated, Sue
Comment from davidray
Another well-crafted piece of literature. Full of emotion,one grasps the importance of you expressing the need to find peace to add balance to life.
Take the time to smell the flowers sort-of-thing.
Good work!
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Another well-crafted piece of literature. Full of emotion,one grasps the importance of you expressing the need to find peace to add balance to life.
Take the time to smell the flowers sort-of-thing.
Good work!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
Comment from tonyh1688
Hi, 6teezkid. Your poem evokes so much peace and tranquility I am considering using the last stanza as my epitaph. I will give proper acknowledgement, of course. But joking aside your words combined are like a mantra in a meditation exercise - it lulls one into a higher level of tranquility. And the illustration perfectly encapsulates the message of the poem. More power to you.
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Hi, 6teezkid. Your poem evokes so much peace and tranquility I am considering using the last stanza as my epitaph. I will give proper acknowledgement, of course. But joking aside your words combined are like a mantra in a meditation exercise - it lulls one into a higher level of tranquility. And the illustration perfectly encapsulates the message of the poem. More power to you.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
Comment from Jo52800
A wonderful moment captured and a great way to remind us all to stop and smell the flowers as they say in cliche. Yours is definitely not cliche, it's very well done. It moves well and is quite a beautiful expression of enjoyment in a quiet moment.
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A wonderful moment captured and a great way to remind us all to stop and smell the flowers as they say in cliche. Yours is definitely not cliche, it's very well done. It moves well and is quite a beautiful expression of enjoyment in a quiet moment.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008