Hallowseduction
Enter this abode, if you dare...29 total reviews
Comment from nora arjuna
Hello Mike, sorry for taking so long to get to this. Yes, it was rather a surprise, but I already known that you should be able to make an attempt at anything. This was handled with class and I enjoyed the read. Was quite worried of the warning at the beginning, cause I've been trying to stay away from rated posts during this month. Won't be spending as much time here to allow time for some spiritual needs. Explained this in my latest post - Ramadhan Again. Take care.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
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Hello Mike, sorry for taking so long to get to this. Yes, it was rather a surprise, but I already known that you should be able to make an attempt at anything. This was handled with class and I enjoyed the read. Was quite worried of the warning at the beginning, cause I've been trying to stay away from rated posts during this month. Won't be spending as much time here to allow time for some spiritual needs. Explained this in my latest post - Ramadhan Again. Take care.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
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All things considering, I enjoy this compliment. I figured that most people have their own imagination and just wanted to hint at their arriving. lol Thank you so much for your compliments and this review. Mike
I will read you latest post in a short while. Blessings, Mike
Comment from P1
Seductively affected with each other,;
with locked eyes, together they hover - just a thought mike how aobut affected by each other since you use with again in the next line... that was the only thing that jarred a little with me otherwise...loved it. hugs lynda.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2008
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Seductively affected with each other,;
with locked eyes, together they hover - just a thought mike how aobut affected by each other since you use with again in the next line... that was the only thing that jarred a little with me otherwise...loved it. hugs lynda.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2008
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I did make a correction, based on this review, "Seductively affected with each's spirit;with locked eyes, together they hover.Seeking from the other their life;
making their partner with pleasure rife." Let me know. From my standpoint, I fear this may be the truth. lol Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Mike K2
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i like it mike hugs lynda
Comment from Wild Ruby
The flow and rhyme done well what an experience that would be ..... Liked the verse about laying a rubber spider on her breast to give one last morning fright quiet humorous too......good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2008
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The flow and rhyme done well what an experience that would be ..... Liked the verse about laying a rubber spider on her breast to give one last morning fright quiet humorous too......good luck with the contest
Comment Written 10-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2008
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Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Mike K2
Comment from Shari_K
This is different from what I usually read from you, but not in a bad way, in an imaginative and creative way. Your poem flows nicely and an excellent one for Halloween. Very interesting notes as well. Good luck in the contest with this one!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2008
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This is different from what I usually read from you, but not in a bad way, in an imaginative and creative way. Your poem flows nicely and an excellent one for Halloween. Very interesting notes as well. Good luck in the contest with this one!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2008
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Thank you very much for the wishes, compliments and this review. MikeK2
Every once in a while, I have to let my imagination out there. lol
Comment from luvcraft
This is an area few venture into. I say go further with your vision. You put a warning on it, why? There wasn't anything graphic. Go deeper.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2008
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This is an area few venture into. I say go further with your vision. You put a warning on it, why? There wasn't anything graphic. Go deeper.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2008
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Sorry to disappoint you, maybe the next one.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Not to my taste at all, but
I'm the first to admit, this
is cleverly thoughtout and
presented... the words speaking
volumes.... an ideal entry for
the contest.
Good luck,
Regards,
Margaret
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2008
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Not to my taste at all, but
I'm the first to admit, this
is cleverly thoughtout and
presented... the words speaking
volumes.... an ideal entry for
the contest.
Good luck,
Regards,
Margaret
Comment Written 09-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2008
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Believe it or not, this review tells me a lot. I am very glad that you enjoyed this one.
Thank you very much for your best wishes, the compliments and this review.
Mike
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, this was a delicious dark write of vampire's love. "Love at first bite?" smiles. Great colors, excellent descriptive imagery. (By the way, in stanza 3 first line, did you mean "wine"? - you have "vine"). This poor man. But maybe he enjoyed it. The beatings sound a bit macabre though, for a gratifying lovemaking. lol. Nicely written, very good flow.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2008
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Oh, this was a delicious dark write of vampire's love. "Love at first bite?" smiles. Great colors, excellent descriptive imagery. (By the way, in stanza 3 first line, did you mean "wine"? - you have "vine"). This poor man. But maybe he enjoyed it. The beatings sound a bit macabre though, for a gratifying lovemaking. lol. Nicely written, very good flow.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2008
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Of course, I mean wine, the potion of the vine. I like that hint of mystery to it and kept it to the allure of the Absinthe. I guess the gist of this poem is who think they are seducing who. Thank you very much for the compliments and this review.
Comment from Twomoon
Mike, a lovely poem with beautiful flow and touching passion..embraced with a little Absinthe, me thinks!! haha..but all in all this was such an amazing write, packed with mystery and embracing the mysterious!! Wonderful poetry this is..much love twomoon
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2008
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Mike, a lovely poem with beautiful flow and touching passion..embraced with a little Absinthe, me thinks!! haha..but all in all this was such an amazing write, packed with mystery and embracing the mysterious!! Wonderful poetry this is..much love twomoon
Comment Written 09-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2008
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Sort of in keeping with FS. I was teased last year a few times from poetess' that fancy the vampire side of life. In real life I was bitten by one, I got the sense of the curse of continuing life. lol I know your a tea totler, but if you didn't taste the Absinte, I hoped you enjoyed a glass of wine that was put out.
Two, thank you very much for the compliments and this review.
With love, Mike
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the wine was wonderful...although I might like a little baileys...smile..hugs two
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Baileys is good, but rich for me. What I refer to now as The Real Irish Cream is Jameson Irish Whiskey. It is that good and I say a show on distilling and the had their factory. To age some of their whiskey, they buy the used barrels from Jack Daniels, so that element has a drizzle of Bourbon taste. The other part is aged in old Chardenay casks. I think a fifty/fifty of that and crean would tase better. Enjoy!
With love, Mike
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argggg...not found of whiskey..lol..I really do not drink often at all, in fact never did for 25 years, but, once in a while I like the Baileys..you sip it slow and it is wonderful..cant really stand the taste of alcahol at all, but flavored it is ok..smile..have a great day mike..hugs twomoon
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That's why I recommended that it is mixed with cream. I bet it would be better then Baileys. Baileys is pretty good itself. Whiskey is a slow sippy thing and I have seen women drink this. I got en trouble with some of the 98 Rock crowd for sipping it and not downing it like a shot. The had a Saint Patrick's Day, Beer and Bacon. Have a great day head! Mike
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haha,my friend, you are always getting in trouble..lol, Me thinks you are a little pistol!! lol..hugs to you too, have a beautiful day..two
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You as well. 98 Rock went of the deep end yesterday. I guess your right, I have the knack for a getting into trouble, but in a good way! Caliber is personaly information. Hehehehe
May your day be smashing as well.! Much love, MIke
Comment from raimie
I really liked this and there is nothing wrong with being a little poe-ish. i find him quite becoming myself. I appreciate a good vampire tale. Kudos to you.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2008
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I really liked this and there is nothing wrong with being a little poe-ish. i find him quite becoming myself. I appreciate a good vampire tale. Kudos to you.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2008
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I enjoyed this review. Thank you very much for the compliments and this review.
Comment from davidray
Hi again, Mike. Another enjoyable and somewhat scary piece. The truth be told, I was so enthralled with the seduction of the vampiress, I forgot to cover my eyes and scream!
Thanks for sharing. Good stuff. Best wishes in the contest.
David
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2008
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Hi again, Mike. Another enjoyable and somewhat scary piece. The truth be told, I was so enthralled with the seduction of the vampiress, I forgot to cover my eyes and scream!
Thanks for sharing. Good stuff. Best wishes in the contest.
David
Comment Written 09-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2008
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I am glad that this piece bite into your attention. I thank you for the compliments and this review. Mike