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Comment from grassroots08
Where we live there are plenty of falling rock zones, especially as you move a bit north into the Adirondack Mountains of New York. Great piece here, Don
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2008
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Where we live there are plenty of falling rock zones, especially as you move a bit north into the Adirondack Mountains of New York. Great piece here, Don
Comment Written 01-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2008
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Thank you Don for the great review. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Nice. Very nice. Simple and yet truthful, always out there on the road, warning us; but how many of us truly pay attention to those signs--when one hits us?
You got my vote.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2008
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Nice. Very nice. Simple and yet truthful, always out there on the road, warning us; but how many of us truly pay attention to those signs--when one hits us?
You got my vote.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2008
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Thank you Randy. How are you doing? Hugs, Teri
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better. Voted for you in another contest as well.
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Thank you Randy. How are you doing now? Hugs, Teri
Comment from William Walz
this is ok, but it certainly doesn't show much imagination or any kind of a clever word-play that this kind of contest demands. I think you could have come up with something a little more inspired.
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2008
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this is ok, but it certainly doesn't show much imagination or any kind of a clever word-play that this kind of contest demands. I think you could have come up with something a little more inspired.
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2008
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Thank you. Teri
Comment from babylonia
teri,
those darn rocks have a tendency to show up everywhere, don't they? easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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teri,
those darn rocks have a tendency to show up everywhere, don't they? easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 23-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thank you Barbara. Love, Teri
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teri,
you are very welcome~
love,
barbara
hope you are doing well.
Comment from Lois Delaney
A good story in six words. I've read signs that said - Look out for falling rocks.
Good piece. I didn't know you had a book going on. Keep up the good work, my friend. It's good to have something good to think on, isn't it?
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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A good story in six words. I've read signs that said - Look out for falling rocks.
Good piece. I didn't know you had a book going on. Keep up the good work, my friend. It's good to have something good to think on, isn't it?
Comment Written 21-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you for reviewing this.I have been working on my book for a while now. Hugs, Teri
Comment from chaswriter
A six word chapter? This a micro-micro story! Great imagination. I will have to read the other chapters to figure out what is going on. Thanks for the chapter.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2008
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A six word chapter? This a micro-micro story! Great imagination. I will have to read the other chapters to figure out what is going on. Thanks for the chapter.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2008
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Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Teri, Now you can take you 6 word story two ways. Watch out the huge hurtful things that folks and hurt you with-
Or just don't stand any where there are rocks that by accidental fall upon you.
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2008
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Hello Teri, Now you can take you 6 word story two ways. Watch out the huge hurtful things that folks and hurt you with-
Or just don't stand any where there are rocks that by accidental fall upon you.
Gert
Comment Written 20-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2008
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Thank you Gert. That is so true. Love, Teri
Comment from Twomoon
ohhhhhh, Teri, this was a nice one, so true, and I loved the thought behind it..you took this message and made it truth...more than a note on the road!!! lovely, much love twomoon
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2008
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ohhhhhh, Teri, this was a nice one, so true, and I loved the thought behind it..you took this message and made it truth...more than a note on the road!!! lovely, much love twomoon
Comment Written 20-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2008
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Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Kym Jade
Do you know I have always looked around very time we have travelled near places where rocks can fall.It is certainly a sentence/story we should all heed and be weary off.
Love and hugs
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2008
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Do you know I have always looked around very time we have travelled near places where rocks can fall.It is certainly a sentence/story we should all heed and be weary off.
Love and hugs
Comment Written 19-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2008
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Thank you my friends. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Hello darlin'!
The good ole "Fallen Rock" zone~how clever of you. I swear you're getting more wise by the minute. This is a stroke of genius and worthy of a win. Good luck, my sweet friend!
(My mom used to tell us a story about a little indian boy while travelling from state to state growing up. To keep us from getting bored and restless she made up tales with themes from roadside signage. His name? Fallen Rock. She always told the best stories!)
Love you!
Penny
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
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Hello darlin'!
The good ole "Fallen Rock" zone~how clever of you. I swear you're getting more wise by the minute. This is a stroke of genius and worthy of a win. Good luck, my sweet friend!
(My mom used to tell us a story about a little indian boy while travelling from state to state growing up. To keep us from getting bored and restless she made up tales with themes from roadside signage. His name? Fallen Rock. She always told the best stories!)
Love you!
Penny
Comment Written 19-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
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Thank you Penny. You made my day. Love you, Teri
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I'm glad.