Caduceus
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Comment from Gungalo
They say you have to fall all the way down before you seek help. I guess it was nearing that stage of the game. Better before you kill yourself. Sigh.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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They say you have to fall all the way down before you seek help. I guess it was nearing that stage of the game. Better before you kill yourself. Sigh.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Yea--I was getting there---but, I'm still alive !
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Smile Doug.
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Im smiling, im smiling
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Smiling at you Doug.
Comment from allborn66
I can really sympathize with David. I can feel his distress. You described the scene well. I think having him served at the end was perfect.
Barbara
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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I can really sympathize with David. I can feel his distress. You described the scene well. I think having him served at the end was perfect.
Barbara
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Thanks barbara--always look forward to your comments-Doug
Comment from angelajfrank
that was a good story. I lost both of my grand parents due to alcohol poison. I can't stand drinking. I tryed it but i don't like it or the taste. I got a divorce because my ex husband would come home and beat me up.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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that was a good story. I lost both of my grand parents due to alcohol poison. I can't stand drinking. I tryed it but i don't like it or the taste. I got a divorce because my ex husband would come home and beat me up.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Hi Angela--don't think I seen a review from you before. Much appreciated. Thanks for nice comments. hope you'll read more.-Doug
Comment from lindalcreel
He could have brought in the fact that there was another man living in his house, but I guess at that point he felt like he deserved to be punished. Sometimes you have to crawl before you can walk. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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He could have brought in the fact that there was another man living in his house, but I guess at that point he felt like he deserved to be punished. Sometimes you have to crawl before you can walk. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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You must be shackled to your computer. Get your reviews 5 min after I post.----LOL Doug
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I've had some issues and had to have it cleaned this afternoon. Six computers in the house, and I like the old lap top. lol
Comment from witness4HIM
Yes, David surely does need help in getting clean of this alcohol demon that is killing him.
Yes, I know it is a disease,
but it is also devil promoted.
At least he is cleaning the cleaning up of his vomit.
Not all doctors are that way,
they usually wait for someone else to do it
He cleaned up the dirty hospital room
with the nurses in the beginning.
I do hope he gets clean
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2008
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Yes, David surely does need help in getting clean of this alcohol demon that is killing him.
Yes, I know it is a disease,
but it is also devil promoted.
At least he is cleaning the cleaning up of his vomit.
Not all doctors are that way,
they usually wait for someone else to do it
He cleaned up the dirty hospital room
with the nurses in the beginning.
I do hope he gets clean
Comment Written 28-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2008
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Thanks again
Comment from Aussie
Hi Cardiodoug,
I really liked this. It moved well, gave a good description of change of circumstances, felt exactly what one would feel during a crisis facing them. I would not change a thing. You ended it with the real reason - divorce. I guess you can pull on experience for the next instalment?
Best Wishes from Kace.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2008
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Hi Cardiodoug,
I really liked this. It moved well, gave a good description of change of circumstances, felt exactly what one would feel during a crisis facing them. I would not change a thing. You ended it with the real reason - divorce. I guess you can pull on experience for the next instalment?
Best Wishes from Kace.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2008
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Hi Kace-----I just read you're review from April! Sorry for late reply----I think I'm back now---hope to pots 2 or 3 chapters a week. Thanks for nice comments.---Doug
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Hi Doug, you dirty stop-out, mmm. As long as you enjoyed your break away from normality? Luv Kace X
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Hi Kace----Your Aussie colloquialisms(had to look up spelling) always confound me. What is a "Dirty, stop-out?" Whatever it is, it sounds cool---probably a good fit for me! Thanks----XX----Doug
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Sir Douglas,
Our spelling confounds you? Well your spelling confounds me at times. Anyway, we get there eventually. A 'dirty stop-out' is a phrase used for a person that has a great time away from home and doesn't bother to tell the spouse or whatever what time he/she is coming home. Make sense? Now, does the phrase apply, or were you working? Love Kace X
PS Why do Americans use the lower case i in sentences? And what does lol
mean?
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Kace----I guess I wasn't really working---I must be a dirty stop-out! I usually try to capitalize whenever indicated--however, I'm a lousy typist. Many americans don't capitalize i, or anything else in e-mails---simply for convenience--also because e-mails are informal. LOL---means "Laugh out loud."----Bye for now----Doug
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Hi there, you there! It is nice to hear from you once more, with feeling - that was a film I remember. Now, be a good boy and have a Bo peep at my new works. Two competition entries (if you are so inclined) I would like some feedback, you might have to dig in my portfolio to find them. I get a bit peeved off (pissed off) that I am asked to buy certificates @ $10 a pop - I may be blessed but not with money and the exchange rates to boot. So I meander along and review 50,000 works on line to get a certificate! Bah! Humbug - methinks I am becoming an old fart. This year I will be sixty three - eek! Oh, I am having a bad day my friend, lots of foot pain (not the rubber one either. Thanks for listening, sharing or having your ears twisted. Love Kace XX
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Kace---I'll check out your stories---soon. Paying ten bucks for reviews is a drag---but this site has to make money someway. I'm posting another chapter now. look forward to your comments---I'll write again , soon---Doug
Comment from babylonia
yep, maybe he is finally sick and tired of being sick and tired. time will tell. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. almost too real ... LOL definitely a good chapter, well maybe not for david.
keep up the good work~
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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yep, maybe he is finally sick and tired of being sick and tired. time will tell. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. almost too real ... LOL definitely a good chapter, well maybe not for david.
keep up the good work~
Comment Written 29-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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Thanks Barb---always supportive and inspiring---Thank You----Doug
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doug,
you are very welcome~
i can't wait for the next chapter.
barbara
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Thanks Barb------your comments are always appreciated ----even if you're consistently too kind!----Doug
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doug,
when i went through nursing school i had four instructors. i think they took a pool to see if i would make it through. they said i cared too much. LOL i thought they cared too much. don't get me wrong, i can be nasty at times but i try not to be. life is too short.
you are very welcome~
looking forward to the next chapter.
barbara
Comment from Nanny 6
Though I haven't read any of your other chapters, I enjoyed this read. You have a brilliant way of sucking a reader in. The character, David is very much alive and active. A great chapter. Judy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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Though I haven't read any of your other chapters, I enjoyed this read. You have a brilliant way of sucking a reader in. The character, David is very much alive and active. A great chapter. Judy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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Hi Judy---Thanks for great review---much appreciated----doug
Comment from Sissy Holly Grace
Coming into a story at chapter 25 is not the best preparation to review but just to read this chapter was an experience worth reading. Your descriptions are vivid and I soon got into the character. Thank you for a most interesting read.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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Coming into a story at chapter 25 is not the best preparation to review but just to read this chapter was an experience worth reading. Your descriptions are vivid and I soon got into the character. Thank you for a most interesting read.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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Hi Siss-Thank You for nice review---much appreciated---Doug
Comment from RaymondJohn
What a rotten way to start the day. I like the character and you do a fine job of using detail. Nice pace. I look forward to reading more as it becomes ava9ilable. Best wishes. Ray.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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What a rotten way to start the day. I like the character and you do a fine job of using detail. Nice pace. I look forward to reading more as it becomes ava9ilable. Best wishes. Ray.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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Thanks ray---I appreciate you're support---Doug
